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for California

by SpeedyTomato

person Melissa M Keesler
schedule June 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I have been reading it since the beginning, and really love how much character development there is as well as the foreshadowing. Please please please continue to update. Although a little more often would be nice!!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that I like this as much as I do, as age play had always been something I avoided. You do a wonderful job writing!
person Imbrium
schedule June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is very well written and introduces Age play in a way that is erotic, yet easy to understand. This is the first age play story that I have read, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Are there any good stories that you can recommend about age play? Your story has made me interested in finding more.
person kiannah
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Normally I don't review stories but this one has become a favorite of mine. I am always eagerly waiting for the next chapter. The cliff hanger at the end of this most recent chapter has me wishing that you would post the next chapter now!
schedule October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oooo.... they are getting so close to finding out that they both are already together on the website! Yea! Little worried about the idea of attacks and that maybe Cal or Cyr may get hurt....
person craftingmom
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the premise of this story. It's different. I really hope something more happens soon. The guys do a lot of talking about their internet site, which just seems to be moving very slowly. Hoping for Cal and cyr to make some serious progress soon!
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while, but I'm so glad I checked on this story since there were a few new chapters! I like this story. The anticipation is killing me, though! I want things to happen! I will keep checking beck and hoping for new chapters! xoxo
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story. It has a lot of different levels of things going on. I'm dying for Cyr and Cal to get together! I look forward to reading more.
person hotflower901
schedule December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like things are mocking along. Interesting to see how they handle this in rl.
person hotflower901
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a cool story. Looking forward to what comes next