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by EllieRamsey

person cheesekun
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Although I already read this one on your blogg, and am excited that there is more up! Yay!
Thank you :D
person lividfire
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
“You’ll have no choice but to fight properly from now on though,” continued Mishka, “because now I have even more of a desire to destroy you completely.”

this is the way I react when a guy 'proves a point' by forcing a kiss on me too.
But this 2. chapter left me very confused since in cahpter 1 Mishka kidnapped Caleb...and now it's like the only connection between ch 1 and 2 are the character names...
person cheesekun
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! Wonder what Mishka has planned for Connor... and just how close was Connor to the First before being rescued...? Please please write more and update soon! :D
person cheesekun
schedule September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Great start, and excited to read more. Will definitely be checking out your blogg (as i'm impatient for more). Thanks for sharing this story :D Wonder who has rescued Connor, though. And what are the priests threatening him with (love a mysterious past ;)) Love the world you've eluded to (sort of reminds me of the movie 'Priest' but more sci-fi?)
person Elken
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. The Story has an interesting start so I would love read more.
person Celestialuna
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start of story!!
person moon1958
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good! Hope you post chapter 2 here (I already read it on your site.) Can't wait to read chapter 3!
person YuJe
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chapter 2 as well on your site, so far so good~
A bit confused about chapter 1, so is the 2nd part where Connor gets tied up after he met the First and they found out who he was?

P.S, Your gifs are really cool ;)
person frickfrack
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, looking forward to more. Like the storyline, genre, setting.....