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April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I saw the advertisement for you website on AFF and clicked it then watched the two videos of the story you posted. I totally loved them! I also read chapter 12 on your blog but hated the cliffhanger, LOL. Will the entire story ever be available to read for free?
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March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know... I could swear I read this exact same story as a Katekyo Hitman Reborn fanfic I read some time ago with a lot a lot of parts being identical. Tonfa boy is is Hibari and Connor or should I say Mukuro had just failed a mission to infiltrate an enemy group with Tsuna giving the order to kill him etc under the excuse he betrayed them though that wasn't the real reason... not sure if the end of this will end up differently. Is this a case of a fanfic turned original work or something?
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February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Since this has been published does that mean you will never finish posting the rest of the chapters for us to read?
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Since your story is published, does that mean no more chapters on AFF?
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 10. Great! Can't wait to see what happens :)
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Conner... he seems to have/had a shitty life. I can not help but wonder if he will take the time to have the tracking device removed, especially now that Mishka is around. I would think that telling Mishka about it and getting it removed would be a very, good idea for Conner's life expectancy. I would not trust the Red Priesthood to make his life any easier once "his job for them is done". I think I would rather take my chances with the Vampires as they seem to be more honest in their dealings at the moment.
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 review: (had to read it!)
Amazing chapter! Loved learning about Conner’s past… but so many more questions… what was the Doctor trying to create? Was Conner born or made a psychic? And what happened to Conner’s mother? Are the ‘ others’ psychic like Conner? Have a feeling Mishka has a past involving rape, he was so ashamed of himself…. I hope they meet up again soon!
Amazing chapter! Loved learning about Conner’s past… but so many more questions… what was the Doctor trying to create? Was Conner born or made a psychic? And what happened to Conner’s mother? Are the ‘ others’ psychic like Conner? Have a feeling Mishka has a past involving rape, he was so ashamed of himself…. I hope they meet up again soon!
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! However, I can't help but notice that Mishka is basically the same as Hibari Kyouya and Caleb is Dino from the manga/anime Reborn. Where they your inspiration for the storey? I really really love this story, and can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 was awesome! But I'm curious about Connor's past... And getting a feeling Mishka might have a past with the hunters...
I'll be checking regularly ( more like multiple times a day, really :D ) for more!
Thanks for sharing this great story;)
I'll be checking regularly ( more like multiple times a day, really :D ) for more!
Thanks for sharing this great story;)
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October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good one...please keep on going.