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September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You write like poetry and it's wonderful. A little confusing, but wonderful. May I suggest that when you time-jump, to put in a time marker like "last week" or "not that long ago". It was done on occasion but not always, unless I missed it.
But yeah, poetry. I like it. You write in a way that stirs my mind.
Thanks
But yeah, poetry. I like it. You write in a way that stirs my mind.
Thanks
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September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your writing and I'm In love with your characters and I just cannot wait for the next update, please contine because I'm wayyy too hooked on this story.
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September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I hope you will keep writing this because its really intriguing. Well written story as well. Thank you for sharing.