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for The Verlon

by Payton_Leeroy

person anon
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Where did you go? You used to update so often!! :( I miss this story
schedule December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story totally sucked me in. I had to tear myself away when I had to go do something else... like sleep. The characters are compelling. I really felt Dustin's frustration and helplessness. His situation got my righteous indignation all swirled up, like I needed to go find something to picket or write my congressman about. I really look forward to reading more. I wish aff had an easy way that I'd get an email when stories I like are updated. I would eat up all your updates like candy. Wonderful job, can't wait to read more.
person Lids
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be the new story I check often :D. Love the update, shocked about Jalre! I hope they save him soon,.
person wolfseyes2700
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is areally good story. The plot us great the characters are great. I can't wait to see what happens next. And see if Dustin really challenge s that guy melware.
person wolfluv
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW this could go either way, WHAT A CLIFFY! LOVED IT! read ya laters!
person L.S.
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap!!!! :D I was disappointed in the rulings, but things just got really interesting. I would LOVE to see Melwan get beaten to a pulp by Dustin. >:) Go Dustar, go!!!! Also, I still don't like Dustin's dad lol. Won't happen. It just won't haha. Though you made it really hard for me to keep hating him after this chapter...
person L.S.
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!! I was missing Dustin :) What a frustrating trial! I hope things resolve itself in favor of the poor verlons...Can't wait to read more!
person Pagan
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow.That was really intense. This story keeps getting better and better. Thanks for the update, and as always, I look forward to reading more.
person Lids
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens around Alroan! What is this group he is a part of? What is he trying to achieve? Ooooh! I hope that they rule in favour of the verlon, anything else and I imagine they might follow Kilea :( I can now imagine that his dad really has the best intentions in mind. And do they not have a crime scene unit that comes and takes photos of the horrible things? This was a great chapter - love it. I hope the verlon are comforted.
person ....
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really really love this. I've read many stories that involved a forced relationship, but this is by far the most realistic and entertaining. And it also helps that I adore Dustin. His stubborn, tenacious, clever, ass-kicking antics never fail to steal my heart. <3