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for The Verlon

by Payton_Leeroy

person daqueeenbe
schedule January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Dustin to to find out By four cheated on him. Fireworks.
person Kevin
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Burout takes every chance to cheat. He has no respect or love for Dustin Why not just help Dustin escape or die? Oh yeah I forgot Verlons are not really people. Only convenient things who are to be used.
person anon
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wut? Burout has Dustin in his mind and wants to keep him safe yet he leaves him to be with somebody else for awhile until he figures out who is killing him? Wow... don't know if Dustin will react worser than when Burout was sleeping with one of his family members. Still don't like Burout. Heck, I like Alroan better than Burout, but that's just how I feel for now. I'm sure it'll change...maybe.
person Reina
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! But I'm kin of mad that burout had sex with someone other than justin :/
person Kristy
schedule January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
New reader here, fucking love this story.
person wolfluv
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I just got caught up with this story and let me tell you "DAMN!" it was crazy, amazing and down right AWESOME! Thank you for making it so realistic I mean the fight and Dustin not winning right away and the twist with J being able to help kill Mel that was a SWEET twist! I can't wait to see how things go from here! I also suddenly feel sorry for Burout, I think he is honestly in Love with Dustin and Dustin is too wound up to notice that he is too and I think you've written it to perfection! read ya laters!
person L.S.
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it. :) THings are looking better in this world of yours! Happy New Years!!
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love you forever for updating so quickly! :) Glad you're back!!
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I was just wondering if Dustin is still going to be punished for running away? It was mentioned that his father was going to take care of it since he didn't trust Burout to handle it. Will it happen while Burout is gone? Please update soon!!!
person Nbsiren
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good chapter^^ I hope they're not apart too long~