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for The Verlon

by Payton_Leeroy

person Nica
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Dustin sleeps with someone else soon
person Pagan
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy every time I see that this story has an update! I think you're doing a great job with the character and plot development, keeping it slow enough to feel natural, but fast paced enough to not be boring. As always, I look forward to reading more.
person Lids
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I reread it from the beginning and there really us a lot going on. Despite what has happened to Dustin he really is settling in with out losing himself. I think a lot of characters couldn't do that. And Burout is at least trying, as is his dad. I hope the job goes well and they can get to the bottom of this assassination attempt. I hope to see more of Helarn again, he seems an intriguing character. Thanks for this great story by the way, particularly since humans as alien pets appears to be a kink of mine LOL. I kind of want the proposals to go through so there are more, hehehe.
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Dustin's visit to Burout is a surprise one!!! I can't wait for the confrontation.
person Angel
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dustin is going to be pissed when he finds out Burout cheated on him... I was pissed when I read that Burout cheated on Dustin. Smh, what in the world is he doing? Please keep up the good work and update soon!! :)
person wolfluv
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WHOA WAIT A MINUTE IS HE FOR OR AGAIST DUSTIN? I bet Dustin catches Burout in a compromising position when he visits! OH MY HOW THE PLOT THICKENS! OH AND THANK YOU FOR TAKING TIME TO UP DATE! I know I appreciate it! read ya laters!
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I checked back on this story! Yay, more chapters! I like this very much. The premise is interesting and has so many directions it could go. I look forward to more.
person Kristy
schedule January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with your story. I hope you update it soon. Forever.
person Elephant in Da Room
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Dustin rejects Burout. Or sleeps with someone who loves him or just because he just feels like fucking someone else.
person L.S.
schedule January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cheating on Dustin AND attempts on his life?? Damn, Burout is one busy guy. This world is far from boring. lol

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