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I am SO glad to see you back! This story has been wonderful all the way through, and I'm glad it's continuing. Thanks for the update!

Why are you making everything so one sided? Burnout and his father are getting everything they want while not giving a shit about Dustin. Burnout just fucks who he wants when he gets a chance despite knowing it upsets Dustin. He cares nothing about anything but himself and his advancement. Why is Dustin turning into nothing more than an oppressed stereotypical useless Verlon What are they drugging him with? Surely he still has enough of his faculties left to see that Burnout is a complete ass who does not give a shit about Dustin. He just wants the traditional power and privileges that Dustin brings. I am appalled that Dustin has fallen so low to so meekly accept Burnout's behavior and then work to save him. Better that Dustin kill as many as possible in the household including himself if necessary than become a thing that so one respects and has no freedom beyond what burnout and his father allow their poor dumb pet.

I'm hoping Dustin gathers all Verlon and they start a rebellion to overthrow those Nolre bastards. In the meantime Dustin and fellow Verlon could find a cure for their Nolre dependency condition, but if that proves fruitless, they could also enslave the Nolre, tie/lock them all up, and only have sex with them when their need arises.

Rather ironic, this eye-for-an-eye method, but it does sound like poetic justice somehow.

Really. Because I am disgusted with this backward culture, I downright hate the father, and I severely dislike Burout.

DUNN DUNN DUNNNN! It's a who dun it and I LOVE IT! OR I should say who's doing it! WOW I'm just trying to figure it out myself as well... What a culture clash between Dustin and the Verlon I mean when they had that argument I mean I could see both points but I'm still with Dustin on the whole were not doing it the old Mormon way... OH but I did like the whole Dad and Dustin moment! Well thank YOU for updating and read ya laters!

Didn't realise there was a new chapter, wahoo! Indeed, Burout does have some skeletons in his closet. I don't think Dustin is particularly remorseful of his actions, more like he is remorseful of the consequences for him. Good chapter :)

Hey,
I am just reading chapter 13 and it's amazing, I am reading it in an one breath. Interactions among Dustin and others are really good written and beliavable (his disability to adapt such a big cultural change), as a reader I have to smile when Dustin and Burout go camping and have to cry when he is captured chapters before. But enought of my ranting, I am going back to reading. :)

I had just such a fun when you were describing how they went camping that I had to share it ;) Thank you for your story.

NICE VERY NICE! I'm glad Burout is not being forgive so easily! I think that the one that he slept with is probably the one who is out to kill him for real though... What better way to look like you're not trying to kill someone then get as close as possible and act innocent and then get them when they least expect it? It would devastate J but I think with having killers for Dom's is not out of the realm! Thank YOU for updating and I'll read ya laters!

Woot, he's back home :)

OH MY GOD WHERE THE HELL WAS I WHEN YOU UPDATED???? WOW WHAT A TWIST NO LESS! I'm wondering if Burout was an assassin before he got exiled? Especially after his threat to E. I still think Dustin should give Burout more shit before he forgives him and I'm wondering if Burout would really be okay with Dustin hooking up with someone else.... I'm glad J got someone "NICE" or at least I hope so! SO what was E trying to do really? Was he trying to get Dustin for himself or Burout? I mean really that was one hell of a set up I think it would have been worse if Dustin had caught them in bed while they were having sex. Sorry I didn't see this till now but THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! I hope to read more later! read ya laters!

lol Burout was more wild when he was younger :P