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Hi,
I am asking the same question from myself for the past 2 days: "Why didn't I start reading this story sooner???" O.o I mean OMG! I can' stop reading it. I just finished reading chapter 8 and I am hooked! Just wanted to drop a line and thank you for your wonderful story! ^^ very well written and it brought all kinds of emotions out of me but the strongest is "I am going to kill that damned father of his!!!" lol How could he do all these stuff to his own son?! O.O Gush!!! and the cooking part was very funny too ^_^

Anyway, I am better off reading the rest. Thankssss again xoxo

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon...I need something good to read before I can fall asleep!♥

New reader here. Another great story of yours. I actually didn't know that you're the author of this when I started reading it(I'm a fan of your other stories). I love it and I enjoyed reading it so much. Looking forward to read more of this. :)

Thank you for the uptade <3 It was a very interesting chapter!

LOVE reading this story, as always. Sorry I've missed the last few updates. :) Things just keep getting more interesting on this strange planet.

Thanks for the update! This is one of two stories that keep me coming back to this site. I'm looking forward to reading more.

I found it interesting, your story. I loved the arguments about interaction between species, the identity issue, and the one to convince Burout to work for lord Dularse. Sometimes you bring ideas that make you think about.

I hope with all the changes Quar will still resemble Quar ..I am rather looking for the alien adventure and keen to see more alien traits on Lord Dularse and Burout..
..would a human soldier hit his father to save other individuals? ..somehow quars have more humanity then humans themselves sometimes..

Great Story! I needed a bit of time to get into it, but it's get's better from chapter to chapter! Now it seems the Qualar have to face a civil war...I don't know were this will lead to, but I'm quite sure about three things. a) Burout isn't the actual target of the one who engaged the assassins, b) this guy's the one who induced the military attack at the meeting (and therefore refused to take part in the meeting) and c) his name is neither on Dustin's nor on Burout's list. But this are just my guessings, LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh man, they hit Ervous right before he could comne to an understanding with Jalre!

ONCE AGAIN I am behind! BUT HEY at least I get to read a few in a row! OH MY GOD what is Dustin's Dad going to do to him when he wakes the hell up???? I was starting to like Dustin's dad until the whole I think he's got an evil scheme going on some where..... and to make matters worse he's now involved Burout! I can understand his point of reasoning but like I said EVIL PLOT much! OH and the other guy I wanted to beat his ass over Burout and hitting on Dustin then practically dis-ing Jalre. BUT NOW YOU'VE GONE AND MADE ME LIKE THE BASTARD~! I hope he makes it really I do... For Jalre's sake and his own because if I was reading it right Ervous was getting some feelings for Jalre in the good way. I'm still on the fence about just WHO is trying to kill Burout and WHY you've given us quite a few idea's as to why so I'm looking forward to more clues! OH and I wonder what's going on in all the smoke and crazyness going on at the meeting! Kinda makes me wonder if the guy running the show is after Dustin for himself and has to take Burout out of the pic to get more publicity for him and his cause plus move on up in their world.... OH and I really do like the whole which side are you on "DUSTIN"!