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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it, I want more, thanks for the good read,can't wait to read what will happen next.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Had to read it twice to see if it really was as good the first time. Yes, please do update soon.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is this gonna be one of those ugly subjugate and rape the poor guy repeatedly fics? I thought maybe it was gonna be something more than that but chapter 2 is going down that path. Tell me now and I will stop reading right here.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
don't listen to her. please rape him repeatedly.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh dear... Things aren't looking up for Dustin. :(
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want Dustin to keep fighting, after all his only half qualar, soooo he must have some advantage for been human..
Maybe put his serout like somekind of "time of the month" thing?...or something like that..
Maybe put his serout like somekind of "time of the month" thing?...or something like that..
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, is Burout going to realize he could have a great 'partner' here with a rather refreshing free spirit, or is he going to continue down this path until he realizes that humans before long can have there spirits broken. And Dustin is human, he grew up as a human, he's lived as a very independent human, in his head and his heart he is a human.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
will there be mpreg? Also are you updating junyi?
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Justice would be if Dustin is able to escape and come back to enslave his father as his father has done to Dustin. I would particularly enjoy reading about his father being tied down while a few dozen men raped him and then be told it was for his own good.
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Love the concept, can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon and often.