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Would like to see on out-an-out fight between Dustin and a couple of enemies. Something where both we the audience and the other characters can see what his military martial arts training can do. After all, in matters of size, smaller usually means faster, quieter, deadlier, and much harder to hit. Maybe even an improvised weapon with the broken off legs of a coffee table used as one-handed attack staffs. I know that most all military training in first world countries always have their armed forces trained in knife wielding with the bowie knives, especially the marines.

What I don't understand, is how his outrage isn't justified in the other people's minds considering how important family is to them? His father should absolutely be ashamed for what he did! If not for carelessly reproducing on a planet he KNEW he would be removed from and possibly abandon a child, he ended up abandoning one of the most important beings on their planet. Was nothing he did a crime??? Even by their weird rules he deserves to be shamed.

Dude! I just wanted to let you know this story rocks!

So now Dustin's father wants to enslave Earth as well as his own son. Lovely lovely man. I too call for appropriate justice for such a horrible selfish being. He should enjoy the same treatment he so callously espouses for others. Enslavement and rape.

Thanks for the update!! :D What fun! But what the hell Dustin dad?!??! Modifying humans for your purposes?? : / ridiculous....

Dustin's father is so terrible, used his mother, abandoned him and know all that. But Dustin wasn't nice, he could helped the humans and did not, because of that, they enslaved him too. I hope, he sees his mistakes too. I like youe storie and i think it is sexy too with both. Please Update soon and thanks.

You have a great story here ! I very much enjoy reading it ! :)
Keep going, please...

more more more! great story so far, though earlier when punishment was mentioned, due to it being directly after mentioning trouble for sexing the verlon, i thought it was punishment from them, then later when banishment was mentioned I connected the dots correctly

oooo this seems so good!! :D I usually don't go for alien fics, but this was wonderful! can't wait to read more. :)

I like your story! Please keep up the good work!