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Wow superquick update :D

I like how the story have turned in this chapter, and the camping thing was actually quite funny ;) xD
I somewhat see Dustin as a revolutionary happening to the planet and that he has a purpose to fulfill. So I understand there will be more hardships coming his way.
But I still can´t help wishing his father a Burout to hell when they do something really stuprid (like all the time).

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I think Burout is finally getting it. Lol. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)

I really like this story. I'm glad they are doing something together in this chapter where they get along. I'm ok with a story where they have to work through issues, however I would like a happy ending.

Really loving this story. I applaud your decision to make this a longer story rather than having things "just work out". Adjusting to other cultures is difficult, and it would be a cheat to have it be otherwise here. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to reading more.

You just keep making this society worse and worse. At first I had some hope of the relationship but that is gone now. The "owner" is just as bad as the father. Although you are a good writer.I am done with this story now. I don't like to read where someone is enslaved and tortured and forced into being some THING rather than some ONE. At the moment I am absolutely seething and there no point in continuing to read something that I find so distasteful. I don't even want any sort of reconciliation between any of them. I just want Dustin to escape to a ship with enough firepower to destroy the entire civilization and for his father and "mate" to know exactly what is coming, who is doing it, and why and have no hope of preventing the strike. If it actually means Dustin's death that is OK for as he said dead is better than what they are doing to him.

All I'm saying is that I think Dustin's dad and Burout need to have the shit knocked out of them (excuse the language). But great story btw. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

Poor Dustin - he's trapped! I can't believe Burout - taking someone new and especially Dustin's sister. It was said before that children were part of the relationship but so soon.?. I understand the whole missing for a month and thinking the worst but maybe he could have waited to introduce Dustin to his new partner. I miss the old Burout. He used to be understanding and seemed to care about Dustin's state of mind when it came to him feeling like a slave and wanting to escape but now he's becoming just like Dustin's father. I was routing for the two of them leaving the planet and staying together but now I just want Dustin away from everyone he's with and happy with someone new who only has eye's for him.

I agree with previous reviews. Dustin definitely needs to get away from there, and find himself some true love. And show all these crazy people what it means to be a human! And that it´s not OK to do what they do!!

Long chapter as always and a quick update, yay! Looking forward to next chapter! Hugs

Oh god! This is awful. Poor Dustin.

I really want him to escape his horrible father and the insensitive Burout. Sharing his so called "mate" with his sibling?! Nobody would be happy about that. Please, tell me Dustin is going to have his revenge here? Find another mate maybe, one more worthy of him. One who would treat him with respect.

It's so frustrating for poor Dustin !! And I want to hurt his father, his sister, his lover...^^'
Well, everyone !
Thanks for the fast update. :)