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for Exit From the City

by Melsiebug

person sapphire2619
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lolz makes sense why they would eventually run into Quint again- only safe for them will be the pirate island
person just_MET
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible woman Topher's grandmother is. I know that the culture is supposed to be completely different, but I'm with Exit on this one, she's awful.
person anon
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love your style. you have seemingly ,with very little effort ,created a very beleivable AU. Get the feeling there's going to be heatbreak in here for poor Exit.
person Usagi
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't review stories often but I love your stories. I'm always excited when I see you've posted more! Can't wait to read more of this story.
person just_MET
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, poor Jack! These boys just can't seem to catch a break, lol. I am enjoying what you have so far, thanks so much for sharing!
person amberbead
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your characters are in a bit of a fix this time. I'm wondering how you will resolve it. I have been a fan of your Exit stories from the beginning. I think I'm going to have to have a reread because I have forgotten enough to know I will enjoy them all over again. My favorite part of your stories is the "voice" of the character of Exit. He is believable and likable and I enjoy reading his take on the world and people around him. He is one of my favorite characters I have come across in reading. Thank you for many hours of happy reading.
person anom
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know, avid and loyal reader her, I love all your Exit stories. I'm really looking forward to where this one is going. I have the feeling, that friend of Jasper's was bad news and Exit was way to liberal in giving away information about the small group. But if it leads us to a meeting with Quint in turn, it'll have been worth the trouble it will probably conjure. I just love Quint.

I'll be really sad to see the series end, if this is the last installment. Exit really grew during the series. He's far less naive by now (though he still has his moments) and he's gotten a lot more mature (though this might be largely due to the juxtaposition with Topher ;) ). You're really doing a superb job portraying that.
person just_MET
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kinsey... I didn't want to feel sorry for her, dangit! Lol I'm so glad you're back with another tale in the life of Exit and the boys. Love what you have so far, thanks for sharing!
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am liking it so far! And I am hoping that all three of them end up on The Firebrat with Quint :)
person syfy
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello!
Goodness but I've missed Exit! Great start here, thanks!