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Absolutely awesome 

Absolutely awesome 

This was a fun read. I liked the pace of it--slow enough to be believable, but fast enough to avoid being drawn-out and overly angsty. The only bit I didn't buy was the idea that a woman who hasn't had sex or even masturbated in 10 years (as implied in chapter 2) is enough of a sexual free spirit that she could be convinced to sleep with a total stranger while blindfolded. But I liked the sex scenes, as well as the way the relationship between mother and son developed after their first encounter. Nicely done.

Hmm. The end was a bit quick and I somehow get the sense that you were hurrying to conclude it. It was written very well, I just think it had the potential to be so much more. You could have done a lot with their relationship, portrayed Elizabeth's soul-searching before accepting Anthony, but the end felt rather rushed. That being said, good work anyhow.

I thought this was written very well, and am interested to see where it will go. Please keep writing!
Happy New Year, by the way.