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for The Birthday Gift

by Vordi

person Anonymous
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Nice intro, but disappointed there isn't more...

person Anai
schedule January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking where this is headed, some very nicely written (future) smut and my favorite kink. Please keep updating
person Slap Nuts
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd! I just found this story and am hooked. Please continue and update soon!
person pupette
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really intrigued by this story and I like it a lot so far.
I only hope you will continue it,I usually don't start ongoing stories because 99% of the authors never finish them, buuut I couldn't resist this one.
It's interesting that I have no idea what to expect of this story.Probably because you said it yourself that you write on the spot that I have no clue where this is going.And I love it, it's keeping me on the edge.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this and want more soon!
person TabFan
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I get why 'intense' training would require lots of pain, but why would 'standard'? I think you and I have different ideas of 'standard'. Could you please tell me which warnings which training includes? There are some warnings I'd rather not read.
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I like this story and it reminds me of another author whose story I was reading but seems to have been discontinued (I won't give the name though) so hope you continue it to the end. I am confused, is this really a birthday present from Jamie and will they eventually be let go?
person popthatbubble
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh! What an interesting premise! I wonder if jamie wants to create a harem but it really sucks to betray his friends! Excited for the next two! Especially Winters'! George and Miles looks to be quite cute even if it's a rather deprecating situation... Ben and Adam seems quite hot, why is Ben the hot priority but not Winters? Haha considering the latter's more expensive? Can't wait for the smut!
person Howdy
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... More please?

I like this, I like this a whole lot! It's only 3 chapters in so I don't have much to say except... more please :)
person Hazel
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this book!! It's amazing! It had me wantin to read more! So please continue!!:)