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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet and tender little vignette, and the love between them is beguiling.
The imagery is deftly presented, and I could all but smell the clean cotton hanging in the sun. Simply lovely!
The imagery is deftly presented, and I could all but smell the clean cotton hanging in the sun. Simply lovely!
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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy indeed. But what made it even more sexy for me is that you could feel the love between them, so it wasn't just mindless sex; the love there makes it just that much more special for them. Well done, I enjoyed that. :-)
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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So very hot and without any dialogue I love that you can just concentrate on the beautiful imagery :) Just imagining them out in the sun with the laundry moving in the breeze is such a romantic setting :) What a wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading it^^