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Very very interesting storyline, cannot wait for the next chapter....I am hooked!

Hi! Love the story! I just joined this site and saw that you are looking for a beta. I have never done it before (if you don't count correcting friends homeworks.. ;) ) but I would like to try. If you are interested contact me back.

While I am very sad for Dave and all the shit he has been put through un this chapter... I am glad he has been officially rescued so the story can move on and I am sure his life will get better (eventually). Hope the new chapter has Alco returning and some interaction between him and Dave. Also I wonder what the Rescue team took out of the house in those two bags as Dave would not have had anywhere near that amount of "belongings".

I was both surprised and unsurprised you had Kyle, his wife and 2 random sister-in-laws leave the house as well. If I was somehow involved in that family I would want to get the hell out at the first available opportunity. Kind of makes you wonder how any of the sons managed to get a wife in the first place... or how what the overall community they live in is like to let this happen.

So glad you got Dave away from that family. Geez, what kind of family patriarch beats and rapes his own son? I hope he leads a much better life among the demons. It's so ironic that the demons seem nicer than the humans. I have a question: just who are the demons fighting right now (unless I missed that?)

I really like your story! Dave's family sure is disfunctional. I really hope Dave's family doesn't try to hurt him or imprison him or cast him out for what what happened. They already seem to treat him bad enough. Dave seems like a really nice person. Can't wait to see the world you created for your demons! Thank you for the great story.

I love it please continue, chapter 3 please!!!!!!.

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Hi. Your story starts interesting. There is however one confusing thing I wish to point out. The charakters names and their introduction are not always clear. At first you focus on the boy and introduce the demons as stangers - no names. As soon as the action starts every demon suddenly has a name and a specific position in a team. You know your charakters and the story before writing it, so it is easy to progress faster. The readers don't and would need a setence or two more to clear things up.

hi dear

this story is amazing only one chapter and i have fallen in love with it

ok the healer and hairy man are couple maybe arco and morvan and dave can be a couple too

are they werewolf or something else??
another chapter please

I can't say anything as the story is in it beginning and I didn't read the old version but I think it will be interesting especially with the mpreg.