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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person Anon
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank you so much for the update! It's getting incredibly exciting, can't wait to read what happens!

person wolfluv
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

OH my goodness!  I'm still not quite sure what Ian's power is I mean can he use it himself?  OH and what an awesome gift this was!  Well both chapters actually!  I was sooooo happy!  I still am!  Anywho short chapter or not I'll take what I can get!  THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!  I hope Ian and Tim can make a break for it.  It's kinda of an odd simon says in away.

person marlod
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi, I had a bad week and this chaper cheered me up. Thx for updatin

person Anonymous
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is an amazing story!! I keep checking every day to see if you post the next part! I can’t wait to read the next part!!

person Debbie
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I don't care if the chapters are short, just keep them coming!  I can't wait to see how this all ends up.

person mary
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I don't care if it is short, I want more!!!!!!! I loooooooveee this story!!!!!!

person coolsc
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Nice start. Wonder why they didn't allow him to leave with his parents and family? Maybe the Alpha already sense who he was to be mated with and maybe that's why he never step in with their fights before this last blowup. Nice work.

person Hideandgoseek
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Another chapter?!? I'm sobbing with joy! I can't even tell you how much I love this story and getting more updates more frequently is the best news ever! I can't wait to see how this continues (I didn't say end because I never want it to end). I'm excited to see Aeron tear shit up to get to Ian. I can tell it's gunna be good 

person Rainwater
schedule January 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg you're back! I've missed this story so much! Shit has just hit the fan, I'm desperate to read more. I love the direction this story is going. I hope Aeron can rescue Ian quickly and together figure a way to take down this new rival pack. I wonder if Ian's mother is with this evil pack? Makes me wonder even more why they were dispelled from the pack by Durain. Please update again soon! For the first time, I actually feel heart broken for Aeron, well done! 

person kylee123
schedule January 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read the story again. I feel sorry for Ian because it seems as if he is destined to be a slave. Life really has been unfair to him.  His own father is selling him as a slave to this strange Alpha, and on the other side, everyone in his home pack expects him to just go along with Aeron's wishes.  He is stuck between a rock and a hard place. It really is unfair of Aeron and Durain to expect him to drop his life completely to go along with their plans. I hope there will be a way for Ian to be able to choose his own path.  To forgive Aeron because he has learnt to love him and not just because he has no choice. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter.