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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person coolsc
schedule January 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

AWESOMESAUCE!!!! You rocked this story. I love it. Together they are going to be so strong and kick butt. Can't wait for more.

schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Cant wait for this story to be updated and I'm just curious...will this end up being a mpreg story at some point? Somehow in my mind I see Ian and aaeron getting together and Ian still being able to have his wish for the big family with kids and all even though hes a True Mate to a male..  I dont know but can't wait to find out

person coolsc
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh my goodness!! They know. But how??? Maybe his Uncle has a power of sensing mates, or maybe an family memeber has been in his room and not welcomed in the pack?? Wow...gotta go read some more! Awesome story.

person thegreymoon
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yay! I am so happy you have started updating again, you have no idea! I love Ian and Aeron so much (well... Aeron a bit more than Ian after the last couple of chapters, hahaha :D)! Of course, this has all been just as deliciously terrifying and infuriating as I had expected it to be once Ian finally ran off into the forest, against all better judgment! Poor Aeron! :P

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next updates! I hope that Aeron will get to go insane on these poor unfortunate souls who thought they could take Ian from him! Also, I'm very curious to see what, if anything, this will do to their relationship. Obviously, I don't think that Aeron can actually stay truly angry at Ian, especially when he came so close to losing him, but will he be able to trust him again? After all, Ian has lied to him, rejected him, disobeyed and betrayed him repeatedly

Great updates, as always! Please give us more! Short updates are not a problem, LOL! Just give us as many as possible! *sends a million hugs*

person zas
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the update I haven’t read  this chapter yet, but I just wanted to say thank lol. Okay I am going to read it now and leave another comment.

person zas
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter, love it and look forward to reading more next week 

person yellow1105
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I am so happy that you started updating again. It is definitively nicer to get small but continous updates. I look forward to next weekend.

 

person Tahn
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yay! I don't care if the chapters are long or short, I enjoy them all. I hope Ian gets out of there and causes all kindsa hell for that new pack.

schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was such a good chapter. I can't even...

How clever of Aeron to think of tugging on Ian's power to help him break out of Rafael's muck. Ian, how are you gonna get out of this one? I'm dying to know. He has to look at landmarks and pretend to be a zombie all the while or something! I don't see how he can snap Tim out of it so he stops shielding them. I'm also curious about Ian's mother. Once again, all I can see is Ian putting on the performance of a lifetime and pretending to be a mindless zombie. 

schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I also wonder what was on that table and what they were talking about. It's a shame Ian couldn't have grasped what was going on in his state. Just how many of them are there in that pack? It's a good thing Ian didn't scream out loud, as well, when Aeron was finally able to break through. 

As others have said, I'm perfectly fine with smaller chapters. I'm just happy to be able to read more.