rate_review Reviews

This story is so amazing, but I know the fans of this story outnumber the haters.
Its nice to see people "loyal" to an online story but their doing it in all the wrong ways.
Please, please keep writing.

I have to say I didn't noticed you took down your story if I had I would had probably cried. I actually love your story; I was not familiar with Evan Francisco's story before I read yours but after you mentioned it in one of the chapters I decided to check it (I began to read it but I have not yet finish it) and while I see the inspiration you grabbed from it I also see the difference in yours and I do like where you are taking your story very much and I always look forwards to your new chapters. One of the things I like about yours (hopefully no one will kill me) is that you are leaving a time frame for the character to "fall in love" and not just push them into the relationship and accepting it with no regards of their previous violent actions and dislikes. But that's my opinion and preference. So you better finish the story and update soon I really want a new chapter. :) Hope you feel better.

You put the story back up! Thank you!

P.S. As always, I am available to view/critique the chapters before you upload them.

Yeah! Sooo glad you put it back up! Will be looking forward to the next installment!

Love, love, love it!!!!! I found this story just a few days ago and was enthralled by your story telling. I am so happy that you chose to repost this gem! I had started to go to one of my paranoid, "all the good fiction is slowly being deleted from existance but noone notices because no one writes anymore" spins. Not on anyone, I know I'm crazy and I enjoy it most of the time, but I felt the removal of your works from this site a definite earmark of the times. I did read your post on what happened to you at the keys of those internet trolls and though I have not read the other work you named, I have loyally read stories that mirrored each other. I found, in those cases and many other instances of similar magic setups and (come on) werewolf and vampire "laws" (overly rigid as a long standing fiction archetype, but still fought over if an artist tries to vary the theme)that the direction of the story and events didn't concern me. I was more moved, as is completely the case with your work, by the expression and development of the characters though their thoughts, actions, interactions and the timing associated with such. I have failed many a time to touch upon the incandesence of a true story telling that you have illustrated in the seven short chapters you have thus far posted. So I say again, love it! Don't let fools ruin art.
Please :D

Yessss!!! so happy to see this. :) welcome back! and as I said last time: I cannot believe Aeron sent flowers lol...ridiculous.

So relieved to see the story back up. I was checking for updates earlier and was really shocked when my url claimed the page was deleted.

Just wanted to say that I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Imitation is the greatest form of flattery.

Please don't concentrate on the negative and continue writin.
I don't know what gave you the idea for this story and I don't care.
This website is called adultFANFICTION. Meaning almost every story here was inspired by something or some body else.
This story is good and you have your own fans who wait inpaitieny (points at myself) for you next update.
Don't be ashamed of your creation! Be proud of it! Give credit where it's due and embrace the fan fiction xD

Ummm, repost? I was hoping for a new chapter, oh well better luck next time.

I'm so glad you've re-posted this story. You were upfront about your inspiration and I don't see any problem with that. The idea of mate bonds wasn't invented by Francisco. Neither was the idea of mates who don't get along at first.

I don't usually like the idea of destined mates but I LOVE your story because it feels unique. The idea of these two characters being destined to find happiness together seems impossible and that's part of what makes it so amazing. The other things that make it amazing are your writing style, the dialogue, the plotline and the characters. You've got a great story here, so please continue to share it with us. :) It's so much fun seeing Aeron fret! XD

People who think they hold the moral high ground can often be nasty bullies. I see it on Internet forums all the time. I love that you didn't give up because of them. Keep posting. That's what Ian would do, right? XD

Since I forgot to review the last chapter, I've written a review for it now:

We got to see a bit more of Aeron's character in the last chapter. It seems like he has a short temper, wrecks things in his rage and then feels bad about it. Just like he did when he attacked Ian in the first chapter.

Ian is right to be scared of Aeron, I think. I don't know how he'll react when he finds out Ian is his mate but angry Aeron is very, very bad!

A night of the full moon would be interesting. I'd like to see if they behave differently as wolves and how they interact as a pack.

The familiar scent in Ian's bedroom is creepy. I'm dying to know why uncle Dan was so perturbed to hear about it.

Looking forward to the next chapter! XD