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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THANK GOD, HALLELUJAH! I was so deeply saddened--like legitimately. I just kept refreshing my page, then I googled the story in case you published elsewhere, then I just watched re-runs of Face-off on sy-fy to make me feel better.

ANYWAY---You're back! I'm Happy! Please keep updating!

In the wise words of Miley Cyrus "Remember only God can judge ya/ Forget the haters cause somebody loves ya"! While I am an atheist myself---I hope you get the sentiment!

XoXO
person zas
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG u are back what happen, but u know what thanks that u are back, today is my first day at my college and I was all worried about how my life was going to be, but seeing this story had just made my day. :-).
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the original version, please repost if possible. I am so glad to see the story, I was really worried when I couldn't find it. Very happy you're back!
person reader1962
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:) happy happy happy
I was disappointed that you took this down.
I am happy that you put this back up! I am looking forward to more> Hope you wrote a lot more while it was absent and you can post more quickly. Very quickly have not had a new chapter in soooo long. :)
person reader1962
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Take the annoying note about taking it down off your profile!
person Sarah
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back! You know, there are some people who would argue that it is impossible to write a story that hasn't in some way already been written. Don't let the haters get you down. You acknowledged the inspiration, and your story is quite different. There aren't any grounds for the complaints people had, and if you need to hear that again drop me an email.
person cat
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I did like your original version, I haven't read the new version yet though so I'll do that soon, and after your comment I went to check and read Inside Out. While there are similarities in the ideas and concepts, I also feel they are significantly different. The whole idea of mating bonds, specific mates, werewolf mating, etc. I have seen several of these in different fandoms and different approaches to the concept, and seen other people be really intrigued by someone else's idea and create their own version. Key thing for that I think is acknowledging where you got your inspiration, which you've done so I think other people are being silly. Besides, except for the werewolf mating thing, I was not noticing that many similarities so far between the two fics, the animosity the character has feels much more intense and angry than anything in inside out and the background/area/whatever the alpha is doing all seem to be quite different.

Keep your chin up 'cause it was good!
person anari
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sory if im sounding desperate but where were you?i could not found um on AFF like ages.u will not understand if i tell you about the waite and desperation.
person anari
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? I read today about the drama going on here.but do you know what i think abou those people who accusing you ,they can held theire openion with them and stay away from um. There are similarities but you have a very strong plot and character.when you recomend inside out then i went on ff and read it more correct try to read it.but i cant stand it after chapter 13.it was boring and their was nothing inspiring or entrtaining.sory even frances but it is true.
person alphax
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this back up. Like many others I checked out Inside Out and yes there are similarities, but your tale is far from a rip off and I wanted you to know you have another fan rooting for you.

Ignore the flames and the wasps, the only criticism you should ever take into consideration is the constructive kind.