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I never read the other story (inside...) but I know your story is unique and special !
Thank you for reposting it ! :))

I find it hard to believe that people think that the idea of "forced" or "magical" bonding is unique. They must be very young if they have read so little that they believe this to be true. Even if it were unique, there is nothing wrong in having a story "inspired" by another. There are a heck of a lot of published copyrighted authors with similar story lines and that is OK. If it were so similar that it would fall afoul of copyright law then I would agree there was something to complain about. Otherwise, get over it. I think I preferred the original version but I am glad to see that you are continuing it. Thank you for the story and I am sorry to see that there are so many ugly nasty people with so little else to worry about that they focus on this.

Absolutely love this story, but where have all the chapters gone??!!

Ooh you put the story up again, I do love this story! :D I love how their relationship is developing and how close the two are getting despite Ian being so stubborn! Although the alpha doesn't help at all but what can you expect from a father, right? lol And I did start wondering about that familiar smell Ian caught in his room and if it's related to his family which left a long time ago.

I don't understand why people think bonds between werewolves is stealing the idea from Inside Out when there are tons (and I do mean TONS, really MEGATONS) of stories with that same topic. I do know you said you drew your inspiration from that fic but there are dozens of stories written about unwanted bonds and no story is the same. Your story is not similar to Inside Out, despite having the same topic. I thought your fic had an uniqueness to it because it was very captivating, the plot is intricate enough to hook me with the first chapter, it made me want to wait and check if there was an update every day! So I think you should keep writing it and ignore any foul comments because every writer does get a few nasty ones no matter how much he tries to please everyone. And I do believe your story is rather well liked in this forum ;)

I loved, loved, loved the original. The rewrite just doesn't resonate as well with me. There is much less character depth, unlike the original version which made you feel like you knew them. PLease return to the original version. I looked forward to every chapter.

Hey!
I was so worried when you didn't update this story for a long time because I like it. A lot. Your writing is really good, you got me hooked since the very first chapter and it was because of Unwanted Mate that I checked aff 20 times a day, hoping for an update lol...
I usually NEVER leave reviews on this website. The only story I ever left a comment for was Tionne Roger's "The Substitute", which is a truly well written and captivating story, and Unwanted Mate is almost as good :))
It is thanks to you that I discovered "Inside Out" and I read the beginning of it to see for myself what the fuss was all about, and to be honest, despite the "true mate, love/hate/rivalry" inspiration, these are two entirely different stories. And I prefer yours.
I hope you will not drop this story because I know it has potential. I would love to keep reading it to the end... I hope my review will help to some extent and will motivate you to keep writing.
Now I'm off to read this new version, I'm quite curious about it ^^

Take care!

Ahh please I'm begging you please repost and finish the old version version of unwanted.Idk but this new version just can't compare to the old version.
I kinda feel like you shouldn't have to change the story because people want say that ur story is similar to another story.
I mean if every writer on adultfanfiction did that their would be no stories on this website.

Please put the original story back it wonderful!!!!!!!

Please repost the story, I like the old one. Beside I read Inside Out and the stories are not that similar. Unwanted mates because of bullying are not such a new idea, although I think your story is different from the rest I've read because of Ian's sincere commitment to hating Aeron instead of where those bullied begin to develop feelings without actually fully forming a reconciliation--which I think was missing from Inside out, hated how the two main characters got together. Anyways I really liked your story please continue with the version you have uploaded in the past.

Omg!!
I want to cry. I couldn't even read the new version of Unwanted Mate.Because I simply loved the old version,it was my favorite story and I was excitedly waiting for the next chapter.