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Sorry for being too demanding, but when is the next chapter coming? I want to know who was the intruder in Ian room.

Thank you very much for update !!! I am so curious who was in Ian's home, maybe his family ? I hope so. Aeron is so disturbing and Duran try to find out if Ian is his mate. I wish, he can hide that a little more. Please Update soon. I Love this.

I'm so glad you reposted your story! The people who were saying that you copied that inside out story are ridiculous. There is a world of difference between two stories about unwanted werewolf soul mates and copy and paste. Its what you do with the idea that makes the story original, which yours 100% is. I went to see what the fuss about was and checked the other story out, and it was so completely different I wasnt sure if the people who were saying it was copied were joking. If your story was 'copied', then so was Inside Out, and every other of the millions of stories about werewolf soulmates.
Love love loooovvvve the angst, and your writing style! I'm on pins and needles here waiting to see what happens next- cant wait for the next chapter. Pleeeaase dont take it down again *puppy dog eyes* .

come on it has been a whole day since you returned put up a new chapter !

You should know what an inspiration you are! Check out this story's author's note!

http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600106509

What happened to the story?! Where did it go?! I was so excited for the next chapter but they're all gone! Sad face...

So happy to see this back up!!! Thank you :)

I'm quite sad to see your story gone. I did read part of Inside Out, at least the beginning chapters but didn't like it. Werewolves and unwanted bond mate is nothing original and I read it a thousand times in the Harry Potter section. Don't think anyone can honestly claim to be the owner of that idea.

The trick with so used cliches is in the writing and you surpassed Evan Francisco by far and had your own twist to it. That and your characters were quite different. Your plot also seemed to develop a different depth to it..

Pls don't stop writhing it

Whew. I read what you wrote on your bio page about the story drama going on and all I can say is that there must be a lot of immature people with too much time on their hands around here. I actually googled and read the story that you were inspired by weeks ago because I liked your story so much (and was excited that there was another one like it) and found it to be completely different than yours. The concept of unwillingly bonded mates has already been beaten to freaking death by tons of people anyway, you know. It would be like complaining about someone writing yet another story inspired by Beauty and the Beast. Ridiculous. And I'm sorry that all of the negative feedback by idiots has made you decide to take the original story down. Because though there may be other stories with a similar premise out there, I thought that yours might have been the best one I ever read. Really. And I do love me some angst, so I have read a lot of them.

Now on to the new story... I have to say that I liked the original better but I will take what I can get because I liked it so much. It seems like you are trying to rush forward a little, there is a lot more information given about both characters in the first chapter and I liked the absolute cluelessness of Aeron in the first version, but he seems smarter in the edited version. Plus, they already have a forced bond in the first chapter, taking some of the fun out of it. But like I said, I will be more than happy to take what I can get.... Unless there is a way for me to convince you to repost the original ;)

Glad to see that your back. I actually like this edited version of your story too, a couple of things have changed. But I liked the interaction between Ian an Aeron, the good and the bad.
Hope to see another chapter soon :).