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I totally love this story so far. I love the angst and I'm really curious about the reveal of who's Aeron's mate is... I can only imagine it'll be a bit heartbreaking and filled with so much emotion. I really like your characters and they seem so real. I hope you continue to write this story and if possible it'd love to read the initial story you had written.

Also I wouldn't worry so much about "copying" someone. It's not like you're plagiarizing where you're claiming someone else's work as your own. Realistically, there aren't any original ideas out there, they've perhaps been revamped and refreshed but there is nothing Unique or utterly Original. If you think it's original it's because they've obscured their influences and resources well. I say, as long as you properly give credit where it's due, you should embrace the rampant thoughts of your own curiosity and creativity to create what you envision. People will always have their own opinions but for every bad, there is a counter good. Keep going! I think you have a talent for writing and for any creative, the best work is always derived from you passion and talent blending together ;)

Thank you for putting your original story back up. Apart from the idea, your story has nothing to do with the other one. The story on FP is completely unreadable and your style and the way of writing is much better.

Yay! :D So glad you're putting the original back up!!! Can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing this awesome story!!!;)

i am soo happy that it's back on!!!! what happend that this novel was gone for many days???????

So happy you chose to put it back on! Went to read Inside Out, so yes, I can see where you got the influence, but your story is so much different (and better in my eyes). Your story is more solid in grammar and has a better flow. It doesn't progress too fast on the relationship part (which Inside Out does) and he really has a reason for being afraid. I was so happy to see it back up. Thank you so much, I hope there's a new chapter in the near future, I really want to see how this story unfolds <3

I actually read Inside Out from the beginning to the end and even talked to the author a few times. I admit when I started reading your story it reminded me a lot of Inside out, but the fact that you said from the beginning that your story is inspired by Inside Out is already enough to let other back off. It's not like you stole the idea (almost every werewolf story is about), you actually credited the one who inspired you. Not a thing many authors do.

Now, while it's true that the concept is similar, as your story goes on (and one would noticed if they would actually read before flaming) that your Characters are pretty different from Inside Outs.
Not only are they older, but Ian is so completely different from Jordan, Jordan is whiny and pretty much a coward. Ian just wants to make Aerons life a hell. Jace was always mean to Jordan because he could, Aeron actually saw a worthy "rival" in Ian. Ian always stood up for himself while Jordan just took it and cried.

So the ppl complaining should actually READ your story and Evan's Inside Out before being a troll.

It's not like anyone freaking own the werewolf bond genre and has a say in what your story is based on.

Flowers and and apology that won't do it for Ian I think. I love the original and I'm glad you decided to continue it. I also liked your new ideas though with seeing the colour of their soul maybe you should implement them in a new story.

Please update soon :)

Was rereading the story, because I love it like that, and noticed in an earlier chapter Ian made a sarcsastic comment about how they don't make cards to the effect of "Sorry, almost killed you. My bad. Let's be friends?"
And that's how this chapter ended. So it seems that Aeron is paying attention, maybe just not to the signs he should be.

I am so glad to see this fix being put up again!! I really hope that those bad reviews that make u take down this fic won't write again! All the best to u and always remember that u have a lot of supporting fans!!! :)

Yesterday was an update... but wait a minute... where is the new chapter? o.O