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Love your story, so glad it's back! You are a very talented writer,can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

I just want you to know that I thoroughly enjoy this story and look forward to coming chapters. If I understood you correctly you will be continuing on with your original story and for that I am sincerely glad. I'm sorry that you took so to heart the anal retentive thoughts of others and felt that you had to change/remove it in the first place. Even if it is similar to Evan Francisco's story (which I have not read) who cares. I love the theme of forced mates who initially can't stand one another and have to work at a lasting and loving relationship. Your story is lovely and YOURS, be proud of it.

I have only one complaint and that is I wish you could write faster. Ian is proud, stubborn and determined to given Aeron a hard time. Aeron has a good heart but presently seems a little dense, I really like him. Durain's just a little creepy but he adds to the atmosphere. I also like the mystery of the strange illusive scent that Ian has a vague memory of but just can't place. Very nicely done. On the whole, this is my favorite story on AFF. Please keep writing because it would be a terrible, terrible shame if you didn't.

Best Regards,

Clara

Hi there.... I been reading the story and I really like your characters and development. I noticed it was taken down and when it was put back up I read about why it was taken down. I hope you reconsider and finish the story. I just finished reading a story that was inspired by you that was called Stray just as your story was inspired by someone else. Just because it was inspired by someone else doesn't mean that you stole it so forget what the naysayers have written. Please reconsider and finish your story. I would like to see what happens with the characters.

Holy crap this is good. I was reading it the other day when for some reason it just disappeared, and when I saw it today I did this weird little dance where I sat, I was so happy.

Consider me hooked. If you're emailing people when you update, my email is symbolon123@gmail.com.

I think a lot of people are just envious beccause this story became very popular, very fast.
Hope all is well, I believe you have a huge chunk of fans waiting (Im)patiently for the next chapter.

OH MY FARKN GOD IT'S BACK!!!! IT'S BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lmao that is just too funny... Im sorry I almost killed but lets be friends..... seriously what the shit. Well Aeron better make it up to Ian. I cant wait to see what happens when he figures it out. That Alpha is a little scary thou, Im not to keen on him at the moment. Please update really soon I cant wait to find out what happens next.

Oh God! I was keeping me fingers crossed for a new chapter!

Pretty please!!! please please update chapter 8! Pleaassseeeee...

I'm thankful that you wrote this story! I had never heard of Evan Francisco until I read 'Unwanted Mate' with you commenting 'Inside Out' as your inspiration. I'm now completely hook on his stories too!

While your story does have some close parallels to EF, the tone is a lot more mature and can't help but see that the later chapters may have darker content. I like that Ian has such a strong personality and find the motives of the Alpha disturbing that he banished Ian's family while he was still a child but kept him because of his abilities. I WANT to see Ian put Alpha and son in their place! I hope you ignore the drama and naysayers and continue on. Your characters are unique and the worse anyone could really say is that 'Unwanted Mate' is fanfiction based off EF's world. Lol, if that is the case, you can reply that unlike the thousands of HP and Twilight fanfiction stories that are posted on the web, at least you picked a story that doesn't suck!

If for whatever reason you pull the story again from this site, please provide your fans a link so we can follow your updates drama free.

I'm glad you decided to continue this story. Looking forward to new chapters!