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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person addiena_saffir
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh my God I was checking twice a day for the update to this story when it looked like it went past a week and now this cliffie! ugh evil author....um can you still update quickly though? I cannot wait to find out what is going on.
person YaduMag
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gosh please update soon as possible. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
This is really really getting exciting and heart-ponding.
Please update as soon as possible.
person Kristen
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Would it be awkward if I told you I loved you?
Like samurai love.
person anari
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At last,but short .cliffhanger .you want to tease us .i wondring is this make you a sadist?
person Nettie
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter. The tension built steadily until I was just dying to know what the heck's going on.

And you ended it on the most frustrating cliffhanger ever! ARGHHH! XD Heh heh! Guess I'll have to wait.

Loved the part with Aeron begging Ian to come to him through the bond. I know Ian is suffering as well but there's something very satisfying about Aeron not getting his own way.

Particularly liked this part: 'So close but too far away, I hovered at the tip of his fingers. I could almost hear his scream of frustration.'

I must be sadistic because I smirk every time I read that part. XD

Looking forward to the next chapter. XD
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update every week
person chrissy
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have just ran around the house singing... No I am not insane BUT
My #1 writer updated!!!
Pretty sure I woke the neighbors...
Anyway thank you Naga Lord, I've been waiting for this on edge.
Anyway let me get to reading it before the cops come get me... lol.
person Rainwater
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it! To be honest it is rather refreshing to find a story with an actual plot and with characters that have some depth. I am also enjoying that Ian has some backbone. All too often than not, I find stories that have the two characters falling in love way too fast without any realistic consideration for other issues that should be factored in. It truly does ate more than love for two beings to want to be together, and your story shows just that. I sincerely hope to see another chapter soon!
person anonia
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven't left just because some people say you copied inside out, sure your story was inspired by that one, but yours is much better. The plot is interesting, the charcaters are fun too. I keep hoping you will soon update. I think Ian is heading into the realm of protesting too much for me, but I guess there are only three options here. 1. Ian is forced to accept the bond. 2. Aeron does something so kind and thoughtful for Ian that Ian is moved to accept the bond. 3. Ian goes through an awful experience and decided accepting the bond is the lesser of the two evils. Anyway, I am waiting for some cuddly scenes soon. Pls come back.
person daqueenbee
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I feel like a stalker, I'm jonsing for an update. Please, Pretty Please with Ice cream on top.