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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person kew
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i need more!
person nanamitakahashi44
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohhh... I wonder if it's one of Ian's family, and they are here to get Ian back? hmmm.... i'm so curious..... when will Aeron realize that he is calm and at ease whenever he is with Ian? hehehhe.... thank you for the update!!
person Mint
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is good. Please update soon!!!
person Negai
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I wanna know what gonna happen! Crazy cliff hanger ;(
person saskia
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lord Naga
Why did it took soooooo long to update!!!!! But thanks i hope that you not keep it to long for us to read your great next chapter!!
It was a promising continue for the next chapter!!! What is it that make IAN sooooo special??????? i Hope you surprise us alllllll!!!!!
yours truely a big fan wink wink
person cheesekun
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The tension was so high during the second half of this chapter I could barely breath! Laughed so much during the opening part... Loved Kara coming to the rescue of the flowers :D But what's going on with that smell?! Does Aeron suspect Ian is his mate?! Loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next one! Thanks so much for continuing to write this!;D
person KC
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
GRRR!!! the site/internet ate my last review I tried to leave. Thank you for posting another chapter and I am waiting for the next chapter.

Poor, poor Ian trying to avoid a bond he clearly does not want and now everyone on edge because of the familiar/unfamiliar "stranger" he smelt in his old room. I hope Uncle Dan and the Alpha explain to Ian what has them on edge. It should be in Ian's favor that he called in Uncle about someone being in his room at the house... but hopefully Ian has not been caught in "denying his bond with Aeron". I have a feeling the scent belongs to one of Ian's family who was exiled.
person Aria
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! Im so happy, a new chapter.
I have a feeling that they know that Ian is Aeron's mate because of the scent. But idk it could be maybe the family thing. Well if it's the family thing I don't understand why the alpha is angry at Ian, it isnt his fault. And thx for the evil cliffie, I was like what are they talking about I want to know and then it ends thats just mean so...
Please update soon. I want to know what's going on.
person Error
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh and the plotline thickens
Was so happy seeing the story update, saw your messages on dA and was waiting ever since haha, no pressure from us readers though :)
We're just happy that the story's back up and updating :D
Will be eagerly awaiting the next chap!
person Franz
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for update. I can't get enough from your writing. Please don't let us wait so long, because I can't wait to See what happens now. I am so curious. You did a great storie.