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Omg how can you stop there!!? I need to know what's going on with Ian!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M BEGGING YOU!

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OMG GOD THAT WAS INTENSE!!! I JUST ABOUT CHIPED A TOOTH FROM GRITTING MY TEETH, I FELT LIKE I WAS WAITING OUT SIDE THE DOOR JUST LIKE IAN!!! One thing I do know though what ever the problem is it shouldn't be his falt! The way they are acting... Well it seems to me like they want to stake him! I know he's not a vamp but... well anywho... read ya laters~!

I can't even put into words how in love with this story I am. It's heart breakingly delicious. I couldn't stop reading it and found myself wishing I was a faster reader so I could get to the next line quicker. I'm on edge waiting for the next chapter <3

omg! what's going to happen next? Loving this story more and more! Can't wait for chapter 9.

I'm so happy to see that this story is back up. I actually went out and read Evans story Inside Out and I just have to say that this story is an original and I have no idea why people are saying you took his idea or story. For one, not to be rude, but his story is not as well written as your story. Also, your characters are two completely different sets. our characters are more mature, in a sense, and Ian hates Aeron because Aeron is a little asshole. He has physically ruined Ian's life on a few occasions. Not only that, but just because Ian has found out that Aeron is his true mate doesn't mean he goes running into his arms forgiving him for everything. Ian sticks to his morals while the protag in Evan's story breaks down and tells him, even if it was forced. I just have to say I like this story a hell of a lot more then Evan's story. Please continue. And you should update more. Who cares what other people say. They're idiots who have nothing better to do but make other people feel down about themselves. Thanks for writing. It's a wonderful story. And please update soon, because that cliffhanger was so mean.

Shit just got real...... Lol

Every chapter has me biting my nails. I like this new element to the plot. I think it will make everything more rounded. I love Ian's little crisis with the whole link that his mate is starting to create more firmly. Please for the love of god update again soon. I love Arron's agony! Lol

OMG OMG, that was good I love love it can't wait. Thanks for the good read, OMG did they find out poor little Lan what will happen to him now will they make him accept the bond.
Can't wait.(@---@)

AWWWWESSSOOOOMMMMMEEE! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

So happy to see an update! I really love this story, and check a couple times a day to see if there's anything new...and today there WAS!

“If we throw away everything given to us by crazy people,” she said, fighting against me. “We’d never get to keep anything nice!” That was a GREAT line, it almost killed me.

Wild guess, the strange scent is one or both of Ian's parents coming back around? Can't wait to read more...

Hi Naga-Lord! That was a great chapter! Thank you for continuing to write! Everyone is definately keen on finding out who was in Ian's room. I hope it was one of Ian's family. I have a question - Since you stated that the various packs fight over pack members who have exceptional abilities, would any of the packs be looking to maybe abduct Ian for his powers (assuming that the other packs may have found out about Ian's being a "battery.") Seems like a few people don't know about your updates in deviantART. Maybe tell them in your next comments for chapter 9? Thanks again.