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Just a note regarding Pagan's comment that she/he's sure we all want to see Aeron and Ian wind up together. She/he shouldn't be so sure because I strongly do not want that to happen. Aeron is an alround unlikeable character. He is ass, a bully, abusive, and feels himself entitled to whatever he wants. His father, the Alpha, has already said that he will keep Ian against his will so that he/the pack is able to use Ian's power even to the point of turning Ian into a mindless puppet. Ian's uncle proved Ian's welfare is secondary to the Alpha's directives (during last chapter and this one). So what if Ian is Aeron's mate? How is a loving bond possible with Aeron? Is Aeron really even his mate? Is the Alpha simply manipulating Ian and Aeron? The Alpha has already said (and proven) that he can. Perhaps, Ian is simply strong enough not to fall completely under the Alpha's power if he is not in the same room. All in all, I don't see any way that I would ever think it a good thing to be mated to an angry abusive "man" like Aeron and under the control (even by simply being a member) of this Alpha's pack. So, I am hoping Ian is "rescued" by whomever he is being "protected" from.

I love your story, I have to say it's my absolute favorite . You just updated and I'm already wanting the next chapter. Keep them coming, hopefully we won't have to wait to long. This story just grabs you and won't let go. You always leave us craving more! Great great great story!!!!!!!

ur story has leave me with wanting for your next update :)

Oh boy, things are getting intense

I was SO happy to see an update on this story! (The happy dance will start when I have finished this review.) Another excellent chapter! My favorite line from this one: "He grinned in a way I was sure drove teachers into packs of suicide...". Wonderfully descriptive; I could practically see it! Thanks for the update, and I'm really looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for the update, it's getting more interesting. I cannot wait to find out who is following Ian and what he wants from him.

Thanks for finally updating! I RLLY lov this story. I can't wait for Aaron to find out the truth!! Please finish this story!

Update Asap please.

WOW that was intense! BUT YEAAAAA!!! A new chapter and just as compelling as the last! I hope the Alpha doesn't stick his nose into their love life at least he has to have seen how Aeron has treated Ian through Ian's memories! I mean really! I can't wait to read who is chasing after Ian I wonder if there is such a thing a double life mate? BY the way I love that a lil smartass like "TIMMY" is going to be in the picture! Anywho great read and I hope I'll read you soon but for now read ya laters!

I love this story and hope Ian will tell Aeron soon that they're mates :-)

Thanks for updating! Can't wait to see this develop. I really hate how Ian is being treated though, it was kinda wrong to suspect him and forcefully search his mind. I sorta want Ian to become rouge but I also want to see how his relationship with Aeron progress. Love how Ian still hates Aeron though, most of the time the character would already be warming up to their bully, thank you for Ian accually having strong feelings of hate.