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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person Jesse
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've been scarfing down your work since the beginning and have yet to review, the shame. I think everyone else has already affirmed that this story isn't a copycat story and that it's amazing! AND AMAZING. But, I digress, I do want to say, nothing is original. Nothing is really new, especially in our day and age, but everything is unique to the person making it, whether it be painted, drawn, written, or said. (: Thank you for sharing your take. I love this story. Can't wait for the next update<33
person Teteichan
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you sooo much for updating, I´m so glad you´re continuing this story... again a great chapter, very dark and dramatic..Aaron is scary0.0...I can´t wait to read more *^o^*
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update more often!
person belllda
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for new chapter, I can't wait to found out who is the person stalking Ian! :)
person notgonnalogin
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I never review stories but somehow i have to let you know that i love you and i love this story and if you could just continue to be yourself and keep doing the things you do in literature that'd be great.
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I was dying waiting for another chapter!!
person chrisse
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love Unwanted Mate!!!! I have read the Inside Out by Francisco... the story was ok... but I don't like the flow of the story... since you based your story from his... there are similarities but no alot... I like your version more (not that I'm undermining Mr. Francisco's literary talent). The way you write the story makes me want to know what's next... I feel like dying everytime i come close to the end of the chapter knowing I have to wait God knows when until you post another chapter! I do hope that you would finish Unwanted Mate... I think it is beautiful. I can totally feel the emotion that you are trying to portray for the character... it's like i can feel what either character is feeling... whether it is ian or aeron...
I wonder though... are you planning to write this story on ian's pov only or are you planning to write a chapter with aeron's pov as well... either way I am excited for the next chapter... please post soon... the long wait is like killing me slowly.... PEACE!!!!
person anari
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
person daqueenbee
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want for you to finish the story, but on the hand, I don't want the story ever end. You feel me? LOL. So, I'm wondering is someone really after Ian, or is it one of his family members that were banished. I want Ian to defy the alpha, especially since he brain raped him. IJS...

Thanks for the update.
person Kristen
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm strangely okay with crazed Aeron.