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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person anari
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi.where are you gone from devianart?pleez update.
person addiena_saffir
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey just re-read the chapters and I'm just wondering when we can expect another one. Hope everything is ok and I can't wait to see what else you have in store.
person kew
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I miss the updates to this wonderful story
person kira
schedule October 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh man I thought your gone... Are you???? Please dont!!! Just like what everyone said.... YOUR STORY IS quite AWESOME. Maybe in a way it is similar to INSIDE OUT OF FRANCISCO... But in a way it is also different...since it's more improve, more interesting but I didn't say that Inside Out is less beautiful. All in all, both story are impressive. Don't mind if some said its PLAGIARISM... Who cares!!! Maybe the plot of the story is a bit the same, the most important is you didn't copy the whole story of Francisco.
So don't mind them... Just continue writing man...Since Im looking forward to read the next chapter. Im wishing that you post all the chapters in one posting but i know its too much.. heheheehe gonna give you time to write it beautifully... BEAUTIFULLY???? HEHEHEHEHE Sorry for my grammar...
person jiminix
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please PLEASE please update....missing this story very much!
person Happy Anon
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that I love your story. I love how all your characters are interesting, that there's a plot, that the setting is more than 2 dimensional (and so are the characters), that your protagonist is doomed (some might say lucky) and knows it but won't give in, and that his love interest is a domineering, bullying jerk with a streak of gold. Yep, I love it. Love, love, love. I look forward to updates with bated breath, thanks for sharing your story with us!
person Nettie
schedule October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to review the last chapter! Well, better late than never. XD

I really loved it. Aeron going all space invader on Ian. XD

I doubt Aeron will figure out who his mate is by himself. He's already been given plenty of clues. He's fixed on the idea of his mate being a female, so I guess that explains it.

Durain was creepy, as usual. XD Poor Ian just can't catch a break.

It seems like Ian is already willing to give this mysterious stalker a chance. That's understandable, considering Ian sees a future with Aeron as being a living hell. What could possibly be worse, right?

Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person Stacy
schedule October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Poor guy can't catch a break! Can't wait to read more!!
person Lindsay
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I haven't read Inside Out and I'm not usually drawn to werewolf fiction but I'm really enjoying your story. The editing is mostly good and I really love the individualities of each of the characters. I feel that there is a real plot and I like the extra danger drama for Ian. Can't wait to read more. Much love.
person Rainwater
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg an update! I almost had a heart attack when I noticed the new chapter. Things are getting even more tense, I'm biting my nails. I'm looking forward to more Ian bringing Anguish to his mate. That sounds a little mean but it's all about the chase for me. I'm am terrible engrossed in it!