rate_review Reviews

Oh yeah and thanks for such a long chapter! Haha there are some glaring mistakes like Ian saying "I need a show" instd of shower and it should be jack in the box instd of man in the box? Unless both works? Hahaha oh and there's a "your" that shld be a "you're"! I know you say you will come back to edit, here's making your life a lil easier! :D

So glad to see you back! I was wondering how you were going to bring things to a head, and I just want to say well done! I can't wait to read what happens next!

I was running a little late this morning to work, so I brought my breakfast (a few croissants on a plate) with me, signed in, and sat at my desk eating while checking for updates and messages until I finished my food. As SOON as I saw that Unwanted Mate was updated, I stopped checking anything else and started reading the new chapter. Halfway into my second croissant I read the line 'I can smell lies on you' and thought "OOOOOH SHIT IAN RUN" So, I ate the rest of the croissants before I could choke myself.

I think my favorite part is Ian waking up next to him, still not fully awake, probably even nuzzling him and then snapping himself out of it. And there's no way Aeron figured it out that fast...is there? If he did, I give him mad props for putting two and two together so fast. But, I have a feeling Ian's going to try to BS his way out of that little slip. Gaaaaah, I want to read moooooore. So badly *claws at the screen* there's only so many times I can go back and re-read this baby. ;-; End up memorizing it somehow and rant about it in my sleep. My family members looking at me like I've gone crazy. So, please post soon!

I am so happy that you haven't abandoned your story. It would be such a loss, since this story is soooo great. I loved this last chapter. Aeron finally knows! I am so excited to see what happens next.

it's long wait. i'm glad you back. i luv this story

Oh..cliffhanger! You sure know how to end a chapter XD Now I am waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter. Please don't leave us hanging for long >.< it's a very good story! One of some I practically pray for updates each time I check AFF XD

Ah! I missed this story. Thank you so much for the update! I really want to know what happens next.

URGGGG!!! I can't take this anymore, the wait is killing me, please take pity upon us and update early. Please! I really hate that I'm being one of those fans that nags for updates but I promise this is a one time thing... I am dying... I have waited so long and then when you update its one hell of a cliff hanger... Damn you really know how to have your fans on the edge of their seats.

Thank you for the latest update! I love your story and am glad you decided to continue. Can't wait to read more :)

Don't leave such a cliffhanger. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.