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OMG !!!!OMG!!! OMG!!!!
u ar so devil to end this chap there ohhhhh i can't wait for so long again ! please update soooonnnnn plzzzzz >^< .
and i love ur story ^_____^

Omg !! Arron finally realized! Great cliffhanger :) I sooo can't wait for the Next chapter!

Oh my gosh worst cliffhanger ever I was visiting your devianart and found out the new chapter I had to read all the Story to better appreciate this one but was worth it I love your history I hope the next update won't take long ; 3 I can't wait to know aeron reaction oh my I wanna know if he's going to force Ian to bond well waiting for next chapter here :)

I have been reading the comments for unwanted mate, and I just wanted to say this is my absolute fav book including wattpad, fiction press and all the others, I really don't know why people keep saying that you stole the story inside out, I don't see it. Besides this book is a thousand times better. I have read inside out and it was good but left much to be desired. Sure the idea came from there but this is yours. Just needed to get that out, this is my fav book and I don’t like people saying things like that about it.
Good luck writing and your faithful fans are waiting 

WOW!!! This is really worth the wait! Great chapter! But pleaseeeeee update the next chapter sooner!!!! This the worst cliffhanger ever!!!!! I just can't wait to read more. To see how Aeron is going to react and what Ian is gonna do ...

So pretty pleaseeeeeee, update soon ... (puppy eye begging) :D

honey

I love you, I love your story, and Im unbelievably grateful you're back to updating it and I can't wait for the next chapter but could you please change one tiny tiny thing >> the plural of 'lung' is 'lungs', not 'lunges'. thats a fencing position. your lungs cannot twist like your legs.

anyway still looking forward to the how they will react to this knowledge!! i foresee some angry sex scenes :)

Updaaaaaaate! Wowzers!

This was an amazing chapter! But it's completely left me on teeter-hooks - what's Ian gonna do now?! I was anticipating the part when Aeron finally realized; boy what a way to find out! =# I hope Aeron doesn't get violent or anything, but I have a feeling Ian may not stick around to find out or something might happen... Please please update soon! Thanks for sharing this amazing story (you should think about getting it published when you're done writing it - it's definitely one of the best stories on the net ) :D

Just want to say thank you for updating this wonderful story and also, thank you for not forgetting about people who loves this story! :)

I guess I'll preface this review with the fact that I usually don't enjoy m/m stories. It's not the men being together, but most of those stories seem to have the exact same two main characters who couldn't be described as anything more than weak-willed/pathetic or dominant/abusive. They all seem to have the same stories too, just I'm different settings. In this category of cookie-cutter stories, I'd include "Inside Out" that you based this story on.

"Unwanted mate" however, is a wonderful story. You've really fleshed out the characters to make their emotions and reactions so believable. Ian isn't just some little boy who rolls over immediately, he is headstrong and (I think) has acted exactly how a normal person would react when finding out they're supposed to be with their enemy forever. The fact that you made it so Aeron found out instead of Ian caving made me just love this story and your writing so much more. Yet even though I honestly enjoy Aeron suffering, I really do like the romantic aspects of this story as well. His desperate tugs on the bond and Ians reactions to them make my own heart flutter haha!!

I am very glad you decided to continue this story and hope that you publish the aftermath of this cliffhanger as soon as you can!!