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August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn i didnt know when the end came and it feel like a sladgehammer to the head.thank you for the update .
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looove the story! You've had me captivated from the first chapter. Literally didn't stop reading until I got to the end. I'm looking forward to your next update, hoping it'll be sometime soon. Keep up the good work!!
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August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, seriously, are you ever going to update. We've all begged on numerous reviews. Please update, even if it's just a small chapter. Give us something at least......
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August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
'sup.
so I read the story yours was based off of. There was a lot of unnecessary screaming and crying done by the characters in that story. yours is much more preferable.
actually I'd go so far as to say I wish I'd never read the couple of chapters I read of 'that' story. Yours is the victor. Well done.
also, if you give up on this story I'll attempt haiku. to... you know, frighten you into submission or something. write more. or else... haiku.
so I read the story yours was based off of. There was a lot of unnecessary screaming and crying done by the characters in that story. yours is much more preferable.
actually I'd go so far as to say I wish I'd never read the couple of chapters I read of 'that' story. Yours is the victor. Well done.
also, if you give up on this story I'll attempt haiku. to... you know, frighten you into submission or something. write more. or else... haiku.
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
Im brazilian and I really like your story, its very different and unique...
Every day I lookibg for actualization of tthis...
I will wanting for the continuatio.
Sorry about my written. I better reading than writing. However I only want to said that im your fan.
Im brazilian and I really like your story, its very different and unique...
Every day I lookibg for actualization of tthis...
I will wanting for the continuatio.
Sorry about my written. I better reading than writing. However I only want to said that im your fan.
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What is frustrating about this is that you decided to take a really long break at the biggest turning point of the story. Hope you return soon. (this is my 3rd time rereading it)
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July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to be able to read more soon when you have the time to continue it! Thank you!
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the angst so far. The turmoil for poor Ian is rather hilarious and pitiful at the same time. I hope you plan to continue the plot for quite some time, as the possibilities of drama between these two are endless. Well written and which there are several mistakes, none of them take away from the reading experience or comprehension. I actually find you method of 'chock' for 'shock' to be endearing.
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So basically, this is a wonderful piece of work you've got here. I actually saw this story recommended on quite a few forums and when I decided to check it out (mate bonds and werewolves are my weakness); I saw it had been removed. And it was because of this other story, Inside Out writte by another author. So I read Inside Out, couldn't really go through it because I didn't like it at all, and then stumbled across Sterek as a means of fulfilling my need of slash and werewolves.
So now, a few months later, I clicked on this story and was pleasantly surprised to find it to be the one that was taken down. I couldn't stopped reading it, I read the whole 10 chapters thrice to get it through my system, because good stories make me act like an obsessive stalker.
Starting with Ian, I can say he is stubborn character, not backing down, not giving up and relentlessly audacious despite the fact that he is over powered by Aeron. I couldn't get over the fact that the main character in Inside Out never stopped crying and it just...completely ruined my will to read it. Ian on the other hand, is a character which has depth and I honestly feel like I can sympathise with him.
Aeron. Now, I may probably be one of the cliches because I think Aeron is adorable. Even though he beat the crap out of Ian, I think we can't really blame him for that because he is a werewolf, being feral and wil should come naturally to him. And since he loved his car, it's not shocking that he lost it. XD
Throughout the story, I love the character development. I love how Aeron is trying to be mature, how Ian fights with himself because he just can't forgive and forget Aeron, because that is how real life works; somethings can not be forgotten so easily.
Through a lot of the reviews people are saying they liked the older version, and I can only imagine how good it must be that they like it even better than this, because this is a lovely story. There are the occasional grammatical errors here and there, but it is all forgiven because I love the content.
Please continue this story. And don't be discouraged by any reviewers who say this is a rip off. Because the idea it self, of mates and werewolves is something no one can claim and your story is very very different than the other one I read. Please continue this wonderful piece of work. I shall be waiting anxiously for an update.
So now, a few months later, I clicked on this story and was pleasantly surprised to find it to be the one that was taken down. I couldn't stopped reading it, I read the whole 10 chapters thrice to get it through my system, because good stories make me act like an obsessive stalker.
Starting with Ian, I can say he is stubborn character, not backing down, not giving up and relentlessly audacious despite the fact that he is over powered by Aeron. I couldn't get over the fact that the main character in Inside Out never stopped crying and it just...completely ruined my will to read it. Ian on the other hand, is a character which has depth and I honestly feel like I can sympathise with him.
Aeron. Now, I may probably be one of the cliches because I think Aeron is adorable. Even though he beat the crap out of Ian, I think we can't really blame him for that because he is a werewolf, being feral and wil should come naturally to him. And since he loved his car, it's not shocking that he lost it. XD
Throughout the story, I love the character development. I love how Aeron is trying to be mature, how Ian fights with himself because he just can't forgive and forget Aeron, because that is how real life works; somethings can not be forgotten so easily.
Through a lot of the reviews people are saying they liked the older version, and I can only imagine how good it must be that they like it even better than this, because this is a lovely story. There are the occasional grammatical errors here and there, but it is all forgiven because I love the content.
Please continue this story. And don't be discouraged by any reviewers who say this is a rip off. Because the idea it self, of mates and werewolves is something no one can claim and your story is very very different than the other one I read. Please continue this wonderful piece of work. I shall be waiting anxiously for an update.
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July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is this story on hiatus? I really wish you could find time to finish it and also wanted to comment on how lucky you are to be one of the very few authors' here to have received such a following in reviews/ratings for you not to continue writing it would be a waste of your talent.