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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person myrt
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see you back! I love this story. In the morning I'll try to write a longer review ;)
I visited your Livejournal page but I have difficulties to understand how to read your (wonderful!) stories over there, since you abandoned your FP page. So seeing Unwanted Mate updated on AFF was a surprise!!!
Welcome back!
person Nbsiren
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Way to go Karen :)
person staar
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG Ian is so nuts to not just give in !!!!! It's been a long time that I laughed so much ...Erik can be very presitante at what he wants !!! love this ...thank you so much for the update, it's been great to see you do so....Please update soon, don't make me wait so long!!!!!!!!!!! :):):)
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes! It was everything I wanted and better! Please upload as quickly as possible for the next chapter!
person Nettie
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the big reaction! It was even better than I imagined. This chapter was healthy for the boys: they argued, sprinted, tussled, went swimming, hugged, snuggled and even made out! A lot for both of them to absorb here. Aeron totally made the right decision when he chose not to force the bond. Ian is definitely warming up to Aeron (though he hasn't admitted that to himself yet), so Aeron just needs to keep doing what he's doing.

The end of the chapter was hilarious. Can't wait to see how everyone else reacts now this is out in the open. Hope we see Aeron's friends again at some point. XD

Thanks for writing such a generous chapter. I'll be back to review the next one. :)
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was missing this story so much! Hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes! So excited for an update! Thank you! I am going to read chapter now!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Aeron... Totally cock blocked. I hope Ian is able to let go of his anger soon so that she can be happy. I also hope Aeron realizes how much he needs to woe Ian before Ian can let go of his anger.
person Mona
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Please more!! Today more!!! Lol
person Pagan
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updating again! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.