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ugh, I couldn't keep reading past Liam entering, they're so annoying I kept thinking of knives through everyone's throats (specially Kara)

O.o

Oh, hell no! How dare that guy just roll on in and start kissing and touching Ian! Oh, I'd slapped him so hard he'd think his face just gave birth.

I love unwanted mate,but this chapter was so lackluster and short. For the first time I am actually not that thrilled to read the next chapter. I dislike feeling this way because I truly adore this story. A major issue was the disconnect regarding Ians behavior or personality in this chapter vs the previous chapters. Also, chapter twelve sort of felt like a filler chapter in some ways. Filler chapters in totality do not really move the plot along.

Everyone for some odd reason was really annoying in chapter twelve. We went from a mixture of these in chap 1-11 romance-angst-drama-slight comedic relief.....to full blown comedy and idk it was not good.

Kyaa! I bin waiting an age 4 an update! This is 1 of my faves & i was starting 2 think u had quit. Can't 2 c wat happens nxt & i hope the new guy duznt coz 2 much trubl 2 the brand new cupl, they alredy hav sooo much drama 2 sort. I hope soon mor revelations r n order., like wats the deal w the missing parents never bein explaind 2 our poor protagonist?!? I was kinda thrown 4 a loop wen u brot new creatures n this late, hoping theres a twist 2 account 4 that 1. And mayb get mor n2alpha boys pov & or his reasons 4 bullyin his mate n the past better.

rukia

short but good
thanks

The ending was crazy lol but good and creates more excitement. I like the way the story is developing. As always it was AWESOME! Looking forward to your updates <3171

Let me get this straight, so a kiss is supposed to seal the deal and bind true mates for life? Now Ian and Aeron never did do the kiss yet did they? Is it possible that there is more than one potential true mate per person, could this be Ian's ticket out or could we expect a threesome in the near future. I'm just wondering because Ian did have some sort of physical reaction to the stranger. Either way, this is gonna take a lot of explaining on Ian's part.

I REALLY hope Aeron saw that because the ensuing drama will be fantasticcccc. Addicted to this story, seriously.

Thanks for the update! I love the new chapter. The new guy seems interesting, can't wait to see what happens when Aeron finds out he kissed Ian XD.