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September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So it appears there is a reviewer who read the story over a week ago expressing discontent with the story and returns again to spew more derogatory and disrespectful words in some false sense of entitlement and supremacy. Judging by your lack of coherency and piss poor linguistic capabilities, abyssdoor, I will like to suggest that your time be better spent expanding your vocabulary and grammar? I find that giving unsolicited criticism to an author equates to going to someone's house for a free dinner, and complaining that the potatoes are not baked but mashed. Sounds like an ungrateful little bastard hmm?
I usually read a story and lurk, but on occasion, assholes do bring me out of the woodwork. So while I'm here and the author appears to read reviews, I'll give an opinion on.....everything.
I'll start with how I enjoy the story and have continued enjoying it for the past year. I've followed the drama that arose with the infancy of this story and all the way to where it stands now. I know how much attention it garnered, and read the arguments from both sides. I've decided for myself to side with the story because I've gone to read Inside Out and found all accusations of alleged plagiarism painfully lacking. I also noticed and find it unfortunate the author is prone to become highly affected by dissenters even when they happen to be the minority in a vast pool of commentors comprising of mostly supporters. While nobody likes to hear bad criticism, with confidence, logic and maturity we all learn to sift out constructive criticism from the bad and let the unfounded, baseless and worthless slide. Treat rubbish with the attention it deserves, which is, none. If there's anything I wish for the story, it will be for Naga-lord to be confident enough to not be affected by people like abyssdoor who has trouble articulating clearly in a mere few sentences but still feels self righteous enough to piss on a story and someone who writes way more.
I usually read a story and lurk, but on occasion, assholes do bring me out of the woodwork. So while I'm here and the author appears to read reviews, I'll give an opinion on.....everything.
I'll start with how I enjoy the story and have continued enjoying it for the past year. I've followed the drama that arose with the infancy of this story and all the way to where it stands now. I know how much attention it garnered, and read the arguments from both sides. I've decided for myself to side with the story because I've gone to read Inside Out and found all accusations of alleged plagiarism painfully lacking. I also noticed and find it unfortunate the author is prone to become highly affected by dissenters even when they happen to be the minority in a vast pool of commentors comprising of mostly supporters. While nobody likes to hear bad criticism, with confidence, logic and maturity we all learn to sift out constructive criticism from the bad and let the unfounded, baseless and worthless slide. Treat rubbish with the attention it deserves, which is, none. If there's anything I wish for the story, it will be for Naga-lord to be confident enough to not be affected by people like abyssdoor who has trouble articulating clearly in a mere few sentences but still feels self righteous enough to piss on a story and someone who writes way more.
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September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! Sorry for the late review. I've been on holiday and there was no Internet where I was. :)
I loved seeing Aeron and Ian getting closer. I think Aeron is so sweet. Ian just has to forgive him eventually. XD
The new character is an interesting addition. I'm worried what's going to happen with Ian wandering off on his own though. The story feels like it's moving towards some big drama. Can't wait to read more. :)
I'll be here to review again next time.
I loved seeing Aeron and Ian getting closer. I think Aeron is so sweet. Ian just has to forgive him eventually. XD
The new character is an interesting addition. I'm worried what's going to happen with Ian wandering off on his own though. The story feels like it's moving towards some big drama. Can't wait to read more. :)
I'll be here to review again next time.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok, I forced myself to finish reading the chapter, and I'll stop reading here because I know how it will finish: trouble will arise that will threaten Ian, then suddenly Aeron to the rescue (disgusting, I know), and they'll realize a love that came like a rotting space flea out of nowhere, and Ian will discover life is good with those bastards (yes, he'll finally be dead, the core of his being replaced with a concubine not unlike Durains wife)...
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, I can't wait to see how Aeron's friends react to the news.
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please update again soon and thank you!
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man all I could think of once I finished reading tht last chapter is "Ooooo Lan ur in trouble" I really enjoyed tht chapter can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update ! You're the best !!
Dear Ian is in trouble ! lol
Aeron will feel everything through the link.
Is this new character from Ian past ? Can't wait to know ! :)
I think his family took the 'news' very well...
Dear Ian is in trouble ! lol
Aeron will feel everything through the link.
Is this new character from Ian past ? Can't wait to know ! :)
I think his family took the 'news' very well...
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm a huge fun of your writing. I am always looking forward to reading more of this story. It was so funny that Ian was so ashamed of the situation while his whole family was perfectly okay with it xD. How could you end this chapter like this! I am really curious who this new guy is and how Aeron will react after what he did. Please update soon!
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it, waiting for more! ♥♥♥
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September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a cute chapter!! :D I still feel like Aeron is a jerk, but who the heck is this new guy?! Eww...i hate forced PDA (one reason Aeron is still on my shit list haha). I cannot wait to see what happens next! I do wonder if the Alpha is going to present them as True Mates! I just wish everyone would be a bit more respectful of how Ian feels. I know Aeron is *kinda* being respectful in so far as he hasn't kissed Ian; but he's also super pissed off and...well, being Ae-fucking-ron. My favorite part of the past chapter (perhaps in the entire series so far) was Ian finally telling it like it is:
“You’re the one with all the power. You’re the one who always gets his way. You’re the one,” I snarled. “Whose side everyone always takes, no matter what you’ve done. And I,” I said, so angry that I was shaking. “Always, always, have to submit to you. Always. Because you are head of the pack and I’m just a lowly little working-class brat. Just look at us now,” I spat. “You’ve taken away my ability to support my own weight and still you’re up on your high horse spitting down on me. How dare you,” I hissed. “How dare you.”
I loved that. ALL of that. I know I said so before, but just really wish everyone really heard that. I know his fate is seemingly sealed, but I just can't get over how much he has already had to go through ALL because two alphas have their own notions of how he should be and how he should be used. HOW FUCKED UP IS THAT?! I still get chills when I think about the Alpha and Ian in the hospital, when he basically tells Ian that he was never supposed to be deluded into thinking he'd have any say in his future. I am sure there is a part where Aeron and his dad are both similarly stuck in their roles and have felt the pressure of conforming to them when they rather not. But what I love about Ian is that he's proof that one has some level of control even over the most overwhelming instincts you can imagine (in your AU). I just love that idea and I hope he ends up happy in the end. For the immediate future though, I hope he gets a break away from everyone just to enjoy the woods: UNMOLESTED!! haha You hear that Aeron? No? of course not... *Run Ian, Run!* haha :)
“You’re the one with all the power. You’re the one who always gets his way. You’re the one,” I snarled. “Whose side everyone always takes, no matter what you’ve done. And I,” I said, so angry that I was shaking. “Always, always, have to submit to you. Always. Because you are head of the pack and I’m just a lowly little working-class brat. Just look at us now,” I spat. “You’ve taken away my ability to support my own weight and still you’re up on your high horse spitting down on me. How dare you,” I hissed. “How dare you.”
I loved that. ALL of that. I know I said so before, but just really wish everyone really heard that. I know his fate is seemingly sealed, but I just can't get over how much he has already had to go through ALL because two alphas have their own notions of how he should be and how he should be used. HOW FUCKED UP IS THAT?! I still get chills when I think about the Alpha and Ian in the hospital, when he basically tells Ian that he was never supposed to be deluded into thinking he'd have any say in his future. I am sure there is a part where Aeron and his dad are both similarly stuck in their roles and have felt the pressure of conforming to them when they rather not. But what I love about Ian is that he's proof that one has some level of control even over the most overwhelming instincts you can imagine (in your AU). I just love that idea and I hope he ends up happy in the end. For the immediate future though, I hope he gets a break away from everyone just to enjoy the woods: UNMOLESTED!! haha You hear that Aeron? No? of course not... *Run Ian, Run!* haha :)