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Yay, welcome back. I thought you had abandoned this story so imagine my joy to see the update.

Really happy to see this story reappear. Not complaining, your writing's a gift and not an obligation. Just happy.

I missed Ian. He's still a bit snarky and funny. Very sad Etta couldn't have found out in a better way and hoping they are able to rebuild their friendship.

Still don't see why Ian gets dumped on for his actions when no one will tell him what's going on. Maybe if Aeron treated him as an equal Ian might see their bond in a better light.

But, lots to love. Thanks for sharing your talent.

First, my apologies for the autocorrect on Aeron's name (to Aston - Kindles grrrr).

Ian does need a kick in the pants. I get that he has a hard time talking about things so close to heart, but finding a friend to talk to, even his uncle, would do him a lot of good. Diaval's point about talking to Aeron about this, in a neutral setting, without interruptions, would be good too. Aeron really is too overbearing.

As for Durain, it seems to me that all he sees in Ian is an Everreaddy battery for his son and not a real individual. It's kinda scary.

I look forward to the next update. Thank you for writing this!

I like the idea of building Ian a shed or a studio or something for his glassmaking. I once read a quote that that said creativity is humanity’s way of saying “ I am. I exist”. Ian’s an artist who's been told his work is no longer important & he’ll just have to move on (I’d be spitting mad if someone did that to me). Aeron and Durain aren’t really acknowledging Ian’s personhood right now. They’re thinking about him in relation to Aeron - though I felt like Durain’s been trying to reach out, with his scary heart-to-hearts ;). It would be good for Aeron to see how much hard work he destroyed too. Ian really does need a friend. Maybe he should talk Durain’s wife? If anyone has a chance of seeing his pov, it’s her.

Nagalord, please don’t feel you have to rush to complete the story for us. If it comes to a natural end soon, that’s great. But if you want to wallow in this world for another 50 chapters I’d be delighted (“it’s a huge were-world conspiracy and Ian and Aeron are at the heart of it!!”). Wait.. come back… don’t run away screaming…

Thank you for the update! I almost didn't believe it when I saw the story up :)

OMG! I squealed SO hard, I probably woke everyone up in my house late at night (I was going to go to sleep too, but I decided to check before going to bed if any of my favorites posted and....PFFFFFF holy hera, one of the ultimate faves right here! Unwanted Mate!). Lemme calm down, I'm too excited. *drops everything to read*

'A fart would have made me sprint away.' - I laughed out loud at this, and then instantly felt terrible about it cause I mean, come on, the poor kids scared shitless.

Poor baby. If only he confided in Edda and was straight with her. "I've had a crush on you since forever, but Aeron owns my ass and I've been fighting it ever since..." OK...now that I wrote it out in print, I'm starting to see why he wouldn't want to say that to her.

Gah! My heart goes out to Tim! Poor baby, only trying to do his job and enjoy the festivities at the same time.

Man, I get a kick whenever Ian thinks things like "Aeron's green eyes cut like razors...how the hell am I able to even see them from this far?" That's just...his own little hell. Being so drawn to his eyes, but not the rest of him, ha ha.

Shit shit shit! Edda so did not deserve to find things out that way, the sweetheart! And worse, Ian TOTALLY needed a friend to vent to and she's now too super pissed to be anything close to sympathetic to him. Gaaaah the anxiety~!

I'm really worried about his moments of "the forest is calling me"...wondering just what really IS calling him.

His eyes were closed off to him? I really like how Ian keeps being so attentive to Aeron's eyes like this~

"Because we're Mates and this is the only time you can't deny it" - I'm feeling tears of frustration for Aeron's sake. It's when he tries to express how hurt he feels that it just kills me.

Oh shit! Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit! He came! I'm already worrying about the repercussions of this.

Aeron let out a low noise that sounded more broken and hurt than anything I’ve ever heard. -Gah! My heart goes out to you, Aeron! Don't give up!

What do you mean the worst werewolf writer? Their inner wolves are always present in everything. And you almost had Edda change in this chapter, too. Point is, I'm not complaining.

We're all waiting patiently for the day Ian smiles at you kindly, too, Aeron. Just keep hanging in there.

Alrighty, I'm going to read this one more time before going to bed. I keep hoping I'll just end up dreaming about this wonderful world of yours (never really happens, but I keep trying!).

I'm glad you didn't abandon this story. I really love it.

Oh yeah !! An update ! I'm so happy ! :))
I really missed you soooo, welcome back !
And please, tell me you like the happy ending... ^^'
Ian seems so sad and desperate...

Yay you're back! I'm so excited this is one of my favorite stories. I feel so bad for Aeron right now I wish Ian would just give him a chance :( thank you for the awesome update and welcome back!

Here comes the hype train all aboard. Im sooo glad your baack you cant belive how i stalked your deviart account. Im soo glad to hear your ok but even more to see a chapter from you. Now on to he review can you believe me when i say i was seen how Ian from start to ending seem like its getting sick like what a mean i visilise this endibg in him turning wokf and ruuning to the wood or faiting in the stop if he keep this up. I hace a feel he deeply believes his hate and its getting him sick its not arron getting stronger his just getting weaker ig it wanst for him rubbing him he would already brake sooner. I cant wait to see what durian does next