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July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've always enjoyed this story I'm glad its back :D
I'm glad you didn't go the tragedy route since this easily could have gotten really dark really fast. Since its all but stated that insanity and death and maybe even soul destruction are potential results of the denial of the bond.
also before I forget there are a couple mispellings nothing major just minor enough to slow the reading pace since the intent is there.
One in particular is kinda funny you meant shower and its clearly what you intended that and it reads "I need a show." chapter 10 which makes it seem like Ian unintentionally is a pervert by asking Aeron to give him a show by context.
But maybe it was intentional if that is the case Kudos.
So is Aeron going to give him that show? ;p
I'm glad you didn't go the tragedy route since this easily could have gotten really dark really fast. Since its all but stated that insanity and death and maybe even soul destruction are potential results of the denial of the bond.
also before I forget there are a couple mispellings nothing major just minor enough to slow the reading pace since the intent is there.
One in particular is kinda funny you meant shower and its clearly what you intended that and it reads "I need a show." chapter 10 which makes it seem like Ian unintentionally is a pervert by asking Aeron to give him a show by context.
But maybe it was intentional if that is the case Kudos.
So is Aeron going to give him that show? ;p
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July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for new chapter! Ian is really stubborn one, I cannot wait to see when Aerion will break his defense mechanism... :) But it bothers me how everyone think Ian is the bad one, Anarion truly tried to kill him and bullied him for a long time... it's not something to forgive so easily... hopefully next chapter will be updated soon!!! :) ♥
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July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yayayayyayayaayayay update! no no you are not the worst werewolf writer!
im so happy to see an update and that there will be more.
im gonna have to reread to refresh everything yay! (lol i love rereading)
im so happy to see an update and that there will be more.
im gonna have to reread to refresh everything yay! (lol i love rereading)
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice you update again, I Love your writing, I see Aron will suffer a litlle with Ian, but slowly they come together. Thank you for your work. Maybe you can try to sell it als e-Book. it is really Good.
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When I saw your update after so long. I cried.
Just a little.
God knows I missed those characters so...so... Much.
I have this mental image of Durain seriously smacking the hell out of Ian this tome around, he messed up big time xD
Just a little.
God knows I missed those characters so...so... Much.
I have this mental image of Durain seriously smacking the hell out of Ian this tome around, he messed up big time xD
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you back with an update , almost though you had forgotten the story !!!!! Ian really needs a wake up call, he can't change anything so just give in before he causes someone to get hurt !!!! Thanks for the update !!!!:):)
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OK so Ian is emotionally repulsed by Aaron while simultaneously unable to physically resist him? If Aaron is so attached to him already, then why hasn't he tried to compromise with Ian's former lifestyle so that Ian can have something to look forward to when going home with him? The best example I can think of is his glass making. Would it be terribly difficult to move his glasswork supplies to a shed behind Aaron's house? I wouldn't think so. And maybe Aaron's father should empathize with Ian more, as he was on his head and knows that Ian considers Aaron the root of his problems. He should even be giving his son tips for things Aaron can do to make Ian fall for him. After all, the biggest obstacle is Ian's bitterness due to all the bullying he received. Maybe during his next melt down he can explain to Aaron how much of an impact that had on him growing up- or traumatizing.
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you continued with this story. It is one of my all time favourites. Ian's inner struggle is so painful to read. I completely understand why he is so reluctant to give in, but at the same time you just want him to surrender himself to his destiny with Aeron. The fact that Aeron finally seems to understand that he can't force Ian shows so much progress since the start of the story. And that you ended with Durain.... Cliffhanger!!
Love love love this story and can't wait to see what happens next
Love love love this story and can't wait to see what happens next
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg you are back thanks for the update. Can't wait rto read more.
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July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh boys. It’s one step forward, two steps back with those two. Aeron doesn’t seem to get that he can’t compel Ian to love him, he has to earn it. And Ian is driven so crazy by the power imbalance (understandably) that he finds it hard to admit that Aeron is trying. Their relationship is so fascinating. So many soul bond stories have the relationships be all perfect immediately, so there’s no drama in the relationship. I love how in this story that’s not at all the case. You can still love other people, and the soulmate relationship doesn’t always come easily. It’s more like, “this person is someone you need to balance you; now work on it!”.
I love that destiny (well, you ;) ) matched up Aeron, who is amazingly strong in the wolf areas like pack sense, with Ian. Aeron really does need someone who’s a little more independent from the pack-mind. You could say Ian’s more in touch with his human side than most. Most people would just get swept along by Aeron’s magic strength & charisma. Ian needs to be won over with more human attributes like compassion and good judgement. But I guess his whole family is a little more independent than most.
Such an interesting story. I read it a month ago for the first time. There’s a real wittiness to your writing. You’re fantastic at dropping information into the story in a character-revealing way. If you’d like a beta I would absolutely love to be one. There were a couple spots that were a bit confusing; I didn’t pick up on the history between Dan and Durain until another reviewer pointed it out, then I looked for it on my reread. A second eye (or third?) might be useful, if only to say hey that was a bit unclear. That’s not meant to insult you or your story at all. Your world building and your characters are wonderful. I finished it the first time and then went on a long bus ride, and spent the whole 2 hours just thinking about it all. So thanks ;).
I love that destiny (well, you ;) ) matched up Aeron, who is amazingly strong in the wolf areas like pack sense, with Ian. Aeron really does need someone who’s a little more independent from the pack-mind. You could say Ian’s more in touch with his human side than most. Most people would just get swept along by Aeron’s magic strength & charisma. Ian needs to be won over with more human attributes like compassion and good judgement. But I guess his whole family is a little more independent than most.
Such an interesting story. I read it a month ago for the first time. There’s a real wittiness to your writing. You’re fantastic at dropping information into the story in a character-revealing way. If you’d like a beta I would absolutely love to be one. There were a couple spots that were a bit confusing; I didn’t pick up on the history between Dan and Durain until another reviewer pointed it out, then I looked for it on my reread. A second eye (or third?) might be useful, if only to say hey that was a bit unclear. That’s not meant to insult you or your story at all. Your world building and your characters are wonderful. I finished it the first time and then went on a long bus ride, and spent the whole 2 hours just thinking about it all. So thanks ;).