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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person Lavi1443
schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The chapter was amazing. 

I can only imgine how angry Ian is going to be now

Oh well

Dear furniture around the house, farewell. 

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait to see what happens next. Especially with Ians reaction to actually being erased by Aeron. 

-Coral 

person Anonymous
schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for updating. I've read the chapter three times before writing this review. I just love your story.

 

Things between Ian and Aeron seem to be approaching some sort of breaking point. Something's gotta give (just hope it isn't Aeron's mind). Ian at least acknowledged that Aeron is trying to change.

 

I get why Aeron can't fully trust Ian's family and friends and must keep Ian's location known to as few people as possible... but Ian, understandably, really hasn't a clue. He's been under so much stress with the Aeron situation that the people who are after him seem to be the least of his worries.

 

Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Hope you find the next chapter easier to write. I know how difficult it can be to write sometimes, especially when life keeps getting in the way. I'll be here to review the next chapter!

 

- Nettie xx

schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg!  They are pushing Ian too far!  Something bad is going to happen if they don't let him have some of his life back. At least let him work with his glass. They can't take that away from him. It's so cruel. Can't they understand where he's coming from. Poor sweety. I want to hug him and put him in my pocket. I'm worried he's going to end up suicidal. I love this story. I can't wait to see what will happen next!  Xoxo Robin

person Anonymous
schedule July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This story gave me life! Fuck me, I was so happy to see an update. I love seeing Ian slowly sub come to his desires. Even if he caves and kisses Aaron, he can still put up a fight and refuse to let him seal the bond with intercourse. I would love to see Ian drive Aaron insane with desire. Please keep writing! I desperately need more!

your biggest fan,

rainwater: justina02908@yahoo.com

person Anonymous
schedule July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

YAY an update. The conflict on Ian is really frustrating =(
Seems like it'll take a big event to make Ian trust Aeron as a turning point. Hope that happens soon!
Look forward to your next update soonn~

person Anonymous
schedule July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

And Aaron shows his true colors, again.

Great chapter.

person MissMiki
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Aw snap!! The clock is winding down for ol' Ian here. I'm kinda impressed with Aeron, and kinda dissapointed. I still have the same complaints I had with him last time we met, and Ian does a great job of highlighting them lol... Bleh...can't wait to see what happens next!! :) Thanks for the update!!

schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I adore this story. Amazing job. Xoxo Robin

person Anonymous
schedule July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Huge thanks for updating! I can only hope another chapter comes soon! *puupy eyes*  Another story I love looks to have been abandoned and I thought this one was too, so you've given me hope! Yay!