Just read through this story and I like it! I am so in love with how you write first person perspective, maybe because I can't really get the hang of writing it but I love reading it and yours works so well! This story is so suspensefull I can't wait for the next chapter. Ian needs to get his shit together.Happy writing!
This story gets better with every chapter. Please MORE!
Rell seems a little suspicious.
Glad to see Ian starting to like Aeron (even though he is unwilling to admit it). And I'm also impressed that Aeron is trying to be nicer.
I also caught that Ian referred to Aeron's room as "our room." He is definitely starting to think of Aeron as "home."
I am completely in love with this story. I am SO excited for the next installment. I love the character development for Aeron and Ian both as they (mostly Ian) comes to terms with the fact that this mating is happening, like it or not. I'm also going nuts about the mystery smell and whoever is stalking Ian. I'm so pumped. :) Thank you for posting!!
I just reviewed, but it won't let us log in. I don't know if it's that way on purpose or not, but that's why they are all signed Anon.
-Ishtani
I thought the smut was excellent!! I read a lot of it :p Oh man that's so mean of him to do!! MAN. I love this story!!!
So glad you updated. I absolutely love this story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Wonder if Ian's ability to feel the link is stronger in his shifted form... Need more time exploring the dynamics of shifting. Love the chapter, hope you have time for more consistent updates this year!
You should give yourself some more credit. You are better at this than many others. This is a facinating story which keeps me on the lookout whenever a new chapter appears. The angst between the main characters is real and raw and I like the fact that they are not "just going to get together". I can't wait to see where you take this story. Thank you for writing it.
OH MY GOD I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I don't know how, but you just keep on getting better and better! The feels never stop. I also love how things are slowly changing but Aeron doesn't stop being an ass right away. I love both their characters and I'm absolutely in love with your writing!