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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person Astros
schedule August 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I really love this story. Ian's internal conflict is so well executed and even though Aeron is veiwed as the bad guy from Ian's pov he is such a good character. I'm seriously enjoying this I've been following for a year now, keep it up. Much love 

person Lisa Howlett
schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Honestly. Reading your story makes me extremely happy. When I see an update I literally squeal. Please keep the chapters coming. I feel Rell was up to something...

person Jane Doe
schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Right now, I'm rooting for Ian to kill himself. I just don't see any other way in this zero sum game.

He can't be with a control freak like Aeron who is the one who controls the soul link, and can even control his body's needs. Furthermore, he's in that disgustingly manipulative Dustin's pack, and that creep us bent on controlling his entire life and cutting him off from all social contacts, including friends, family, and work. This is the very definition of physical and emotional abuse, but unlike in the normal world, Ian does not have the option to walk away or to flee, because of "Fate" or the Moon or whatever. In fact, Ian is already beginning to display classic signs of Stockholm syndrome, typical of victims who give excuses to the behavior of the abuser they stay with.

Unless Ian finds some magical way to cut off relations with both Aeron and Durain, which I frankly don't see him doing any time soon (because of "Fate" or the Moon), I think suicide really IS the better option in his case. It's better than becoming enslaved to creeps like Aeron and Durain, in any case.

person Jane Doe
schedule August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Damn it, I hate automatic spelling correction. I meant Durain, not Dustin.

person purpleriho
schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well.

That was an emotional chapter. I get Ian so hard it hurts. Ugh this is such a shitty situation.

Looking, as always, forward to the next chapter!

person Anon
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Loved the new chapter, thanks! Keep it up :)

person kylee123
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am really enjoying this story. i cant wait to see the other chapters.

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love this story!  You're doing a really good job.  Keep it up!  

 

 

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just came back from an horrible day and I am overjoyed to see that there is a new chapter to this story! Congrat for an awesome job!!! :D

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my God I just checked back on this fic which I haven't done in ages and there was not one, but two new chapters!! Thank you so much, you've made my evening a great one! Now on to read them! :3