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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person kez
schedule August 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

New chapter? Huh? Huh? Pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssseeeee. Amazing story, original, funny and exciting. Keep up the good work. 

person Anonymous
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg amazing

schedule August 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh I'd be so pissed too

Can't wait for the next update 

person Reader of Things
schedule August 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Reading this story is like Christmas morning. You are always happy when you open a the gift that is a new chapter. The only difference is not knowing the date when a chapter will come.

person chibikodo
schedule August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

And that jerky behavior is exactly why Ian keeps resisting you Aeron. ><

Thank you for the new chaptet update!

 

 

person Oo
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yes yes yessssssss!

schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I've been following this from the very beginning so I'm really happy when I came back and saw 3 new chapters since the last time I check. Looking forward to read more and am excited to see Aeron and Ian's progress in their relationship. :)
person Zesquirk
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have read over hundred of fiction slash stories here and on other fiction websites, but your story I can say is one of the best i have read ( even though werewolves is not my cup of tea) you managed to kept your readers interested with how the story is flowing and if I should rate your story regardless of it being unfinished yet, I'd say I'll give it a 9.5/10. Keep up the awesome good work and love lots to Aeron and Ian. 

schedule August 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is the first time I've got some sympathy for Aeron. Cause he really seems to be under the throes of  a bond he can't control and truly suffering. However, he's still not being open and truthful with Ian. Says he loves him and Ian's the most important person in the world to him yet doesn't actually treat him that way and can't see it. TaKing away Ian's right to understand what's going on, making decisions for him even to keep him safe, ERASING Ian - could anything make Ian feel more like he was losing himself?So hoping Ian doesn't give in. I want Aeron to finally get it and give Ian agency, show him he's viewed as an equal. 

Reading the comments it's obvious how opinions differ sharply about their bond and how this story should go but one thing all have in common. We're vested. You have written a really compelling story that people feel passionate about. I hope you realize the relative rarity of that in fan fiction, or even professionally published works. I won't say you're fortunate because, even as a non writer, I know the sheer work producing this must be. I will say you've been blessed by the talent fairies.  Much kudos.

person Lisa
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This new guy seems suspicious. Maybe he's under coercicion to get Ian away from Aeron? Aeron has a right to be cautious but he needs to explain that to Ian or Ian is going to feel like Aeron is completely controlling his life and his choices. I see another fight between them brewing!