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for Unwanted Mate

by Avernion

person 2CinnaBlue
schedule October 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It's been a while since there has been anything good to read on this site with so many stories gone or abandoned. Please update soon I've been checking back to see if this story gets updated for a while and will continue to do so. I'll settle for an update or three per year if needed so by all means finish the story.

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person Anonymous
schedule September 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You need to finish this and get it published. It's one of my favorite shifter stories, and I want to buy it for my Kindle.  Thank you so much for sharing with us!

schedule September 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I adore this story. I can't wait for more. The tension is killing me. I'm left wondering when they will finally push Ian too far and he'll go off or get suicidal. If he feels too trapped and that he has no more choices I wide what he'll do. I hope they let him back to do glass. Poor guy really needs that outlet. Very good work. Riveting. Xoxo Robin

person Debbie
schedule September 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

When's the next update going to be?  I love this story.

person JaimeL
schedule September 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love this story! I can't wait until the next installment. I love the character development and the story, thank you so much for sharing this. You're awesome!

person Batzy
schedule September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I REALLY want to know what happens next. I went and read the story you mentioned in previous authors notes, and honestly, I prefer this one. I enjoy the characters and their behaviors more, it's not quite as cringy. Not that the other one was bad just not my cup of tea. 

 

It looks like it's been a while since you last updated. Hope you still intend to work on it! 

 

Also, I've wanted to mention, just in case you're unaware, but it's shocked, not chocked. I noticed it in a few chapters so I thought I might mention. 

person Vic
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just reread the story. I love these characters so much. This story has such a wonderful ebb and flow of emotions i just cant get enough of it. I hope you update soon. 

person Shifting
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I would love a scene with them both in their shifted forms. Do they feel the bond more keenly in their shifted forms? 

person Danvers
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Amazing! This story is fantastic, I love every bit of it. Your writing is great, and has been terrified at the end of each chapter that there won't be more. Please continue and update soon!

person Rin
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay new chapter! It was awesome, thank you! And none of this 'not good at writing smut' stuff! It was great and can't wait for the next update! Thank you again! :)