rate_review Reviews

Well DAMN every time I read this story it seem I have a long crying spell! Granted it makes me feel better afterwards but REALLY! I mean WOW I've cried over a few heartbreadking moments in other storys but this just takes the cake! I DO however LOVE this story and I really am hoping for a happy ending! I'm wondering if the arms that grabed him were Tim's or someone who's been watching from a far and just hasn't had the chance to tell him yet? I'll stay tuned for the next heartbeaking tear jerker angst fest that you write out and I'll enjoy every sentence of it! read ya laters!!!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!! *crys* WHY WHY WHY!!! WHY CAN'T CLAY EVER FIND SOMEONE WHO ISN'T A PIECE OF SHIT!!!

I love the angst-I know a lot o f yaoi fan girls/boys would be thumping their head pissed at goat for being a stupid, weak girls uke but I love him-first if all that age is angsty in the extreme-at 14 I was having moments of horrific depression followed by moments of stupid impulsivity-running away sleeping with boys who paid attention to me and cutting myself-do Im totally feeling Clay's angst-here's my hope-he comes full circle and ends up with Robert who loved him but was young and stupid and apologies profusely and us now a great person -only other thing is ask- some actual fleshed out sex scenes with some real passion-it's still good either way and its ur story so write what u ws t but I'm telling u smug never hurt a d is great for the ratings!*_*!

Great story well done, makes me want to read more. All the characters are real,human and believeable! Please write more soon! G

Ooooh! Poor guy. Will he ever get his happy ending? *sniffle* Can't wait for more!

Shark-dude is Rin from Free! is it not? I'm 100% sure it us. Rin has shark teeth and is a dick! Anyways this was my favorite chapter so far. I really like Nathan I hope he comes clean and doesn't fuck up even more than he already has. And Nathan's friends seem cool, I don't think they'd be too bothered by some gays, hopefully!

Man, I really liked Nathan! I hope it works out for poor Clay--he's a sweetheart! Maybe Nathan will come around?

Ok, Clay has got to find some happiness that will last a whole chapter!!!! lol

This poor kid, I can't stand it!

Nathan is so afraid of his feelings, he'll never admit the truth to himself.

But Clay has been hurt time and time again and the poor thing is only THIRTEEN!!!!

I think he needs to take a break from guys. Although Nathan was different from the others b/c they were really just friends. Sorta. Eh, Clay'll wind up going back to Young-Soo who will cheat on him again.

Great chapter, timecap! :)

You're really yanking my heartstrings here! Can't wait for the next chapter

I love and hate this story....everytime I start the new chap, it's always so nice and warm and then half-way through, I realize how young Clay is, and then there's the impending doom.....and at the end of the chap....THEM FEELS
Will be looking forward to Clay's happy ending...there better be a happy ending...D: