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What I want to know is exactly how OLD is Jonathon. Clay needs to get a hold of himself, I can definitely say this relationship won't last. CLAY YOU NEED TO TAKE A DAMN BREAK BOY. I will be reading the next chapter, thank you.

Damn... this story is so intense. It's so wonderful and I just am so captivated by it. I'm really glad that you updated and await the next chapter impatiently. I'm ecstatic at how long each chapter is, even if it's a little while before you update. This story is absolutely amazing and can not wait for more. I just... I really hope that Clay eventually finds happiness.

Hi. I don't know if I'll be glad that jonathan act on his feelings for clay. I keep thinking that having a relationship with a married adult is not a good idea and it will bring another heartache for clay. Clay should take a rest from love. I'll be looking forward to your updates :)

While I am glad Clay was stopped once again from attempting suicide and that he has received some therapy, I cannot help but see him getting hurt by Jonathan in the end. I was kind of hopeful for Clay's attraction would be one-sided and he would not end up in a messed up relationship, but here he goes again.

Oh Clay, gorgeous he may be but married says you should probably stay away.......

I am happy for him, I hope it doesn't end bad like all the others that started good.

God damn it, this is such a shoot the shaggy dog tale, man! It's just heart-breaking to read about failure and disappointment again and again. I feel sorry for the kid, but I think it would do him good to take a break from love.

Timecap, you're killing me here.

When Adam confessed his feelings for Nathan to Clay, Clay should have told Adam he could have Nathan. No one deserves to be physically or verbally abused, and Nathan did both to Clay. Clay has such low self-esteem, or no self-esteem at all, he was just thrilled Nathan wanted him. The kid was only thirteen when they started hanging out together; he was way too young to realize he doesn't need to put up with all of Nathan's shit.

I already saw the writing on the wall when Adam came back to town. Poor Clay. He gets used and abused and then he runs to Timothy, only to be disappointed once again.

Thank God someone saved him from jumping, but who?

Fantastic chapter, Timecap! Can't wait for the next one! :)

Oh. My. God. This story. I don't even know what to say, other than the fact that there is no next chapter makes me very upset. I am astonished by how amazing this story is and beg you to please update it soon. This is the first story on this site to make me cry and I absolutely adore it with a passion. Please please update soon. Thank you for being a genius!!!

I'm so tired of clay being hurt I'm crying from the Pain D; why people love hurting him so much gosh!!!!!