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This was truly a well written story. The part with Nathan really made me teary eyed and until the end I hoped that Clay would end up with someone who would treat him well

Ahh... this story... I'm so paranoid about when something is going to go wrong and something bad is going to happen. I just want Clay to be happy and I'm sure that it's not going to happen with Jonathan. I'm afraid of what Clay might do when it goes sour, but I absolutely can't wait for more. I just want Clay to grow up a bit and get into a relationship that isn't toxic as all his previous ones have been. Oh, well, still ADORE this beautiful story and look forward greatly to the next chapter! Thank you~

NOOOO! Jonathon is just using Clay for his fetishes since he obviously can't express them on his wife. I feel bad for the wife, such a nice woman. I now dislike Jonathon, I kind of liked him before but now he is shunned, SHUNNED I SAY! There there Clay, there's someone out there for YOU!

Poor, poor Clay... he is such a child and Jonathan is clearly not good for him. Clay is going to be so broken when thing finally catch up with reality. I find it rather telling and creepy that Jonathan has a Daddy kink along with bondage. I am still holding out hope for Clay to eventually find a real boyfriend who he can be with openly and have a good normal age appropriate relationship with, although I think it is too late for Clay not to get into a Sexually active relationship too soon with anyone. He is showing all the signs of equating sex with love and acceptance, which is a hard thing to unlearn as a teenager.

Daddy? Omg, this guy has some fetish. I was wondering when the collar was going to come out. lol

Personally, I think they are playing it too close to the cuff, is that the saying? They're fooling around in Jonathan's bed for God's sakes! What would happen if Lily gets sick or something and comes home early? Or comes home early for any reason? I'd be too nervous.

I do agree with Clay - he was a bad friend, but I can also see his side: he's totally "in love" with Jonathan, and any chance he can be with him, he's going to take. But I also see that as they are having more and more sex, their talking is getting less and less, which isn't good.

I don't know how this is going to play out, but I only see Clay getting hurt.

I still can't wait for the next chapter though! :)

That was fucking hot I hope he isn't just using to poor little. Kid for sex

Oh my goodness,gracious. I can never seem to get enough of the wonderful story. I greatly look forward to the next chapter.

I hope Clay hits puberty soon and gets dumped by Jonathan. Or he catches Jonathan in the act with another child. Clay really needs to be slapped out of his dream world.

Although Jonathan is sweet and kind and whatever to Clay, I agree with Judy. This is a lose-lose situation for both of them and Clay has been so hurt in the past I'm afraid that when something goes wrong with this relationship (and I'm pretty sure it will), it will lead him right back to that bridge. Clay will lose in the emotional aspect of the relationship, where Jonathan, if caught, will definitely lose every single thing he's worked so hard for. Including his wife.

Great chapter, Timecap! :)

Bad, bad Dr. Jon. Shame on him. Seriously. He knows better. Clay's only what, thirteen?

And at the beginning with those cops. They (well, the male cop), was way out of line with Clay. And how could they even be questioning him in school w/o another adult present to look out for Clay's rights? Isn't it law that to question a minor, you have to wait for a parent to be there?

Terrific chapter, timecap! :) As usual! I just adore this story! Although I am annoyed that yet someone else is taking advantage of poor Clay. :(