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by onamadfreakingtrip

person Rachel
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next update!!!
person reader1962
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM

enjoying this. hope you update soon!
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, so far!
person L.S.
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to read more. :) I love me some paranormal stories!! And your comment leaves me a little worried for Law. :( eeks!!
person Thirdly
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what I was getting myself into, reading this one. Hurts too much. I know a lot of people that can relate to Law and his feeling trapped. Too many people turn to liquor for everything...liquor and drugs. It drives the rest of us that refuse to resort to that kind of thing absolutely crazy trying to keep up with them. They turn a blind eye to themselves...and I'm going to stop that rant right in its tracks. Hang in there Law. I hope things turn out alright for him and the innocents in his family.
person j
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really interesting so far. Definitely going to continue reading. Please update quickly!!
person B
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You've set up Law well, it gives great start of the story and the character development. I find myself rooting for the Gooding kids, especially Lawrence. can't wait to read more