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Aaaaaaaah I am so glad you're back and I can't wait for the next update!

Oh my god! I was so excited to see that you had finally returned and updated! It really is such a great start to what certainly has all the qualities to be an amazing story. I love the characters...especially Law. I think you are doing a great job and you shouldnt be worried if the characters seem real enough or not. This is your story so dont let anyone tell you how to do it. I think its great so far and I think it will only get better. So just keep doing it your way and I cant wait for an update! Thanks for sharing your talent with us :)

I really love this story so far and I absolutely can't wait for an update <3

Please please more of this story! I really can't wait to read more!
It's such a great story! And I wonder what Johna is? Maybe a demon... I don't know! Haha!
Anyways, please more soon! :)

Is jonah some sort of fallen angel that would explain the healing abilities and arn't fallen angels kind of "mean" so that would explain the fear that law has.

I think J is... a wolf-witch. I mean why would he be out side with out clothes and his ablity to heal and disern what was wrong with Law I figured he jumped out of the window from his bedroom in his wolf form and that's how he sunck up on Law. But yeah I am wondering what he is though and I'm totally digging this story so far! I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for the next chapter! read ya laters!!!

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Interesting story. I read chapter one several days ago and have to admit that I wasn't overly impressed. While I liked Law, the scenes, words, and actions of those he interacted with seemed 'off' for some reason. Almost like Law and Neptune were the only solid things in a crazy Children of the Corn/Twilight Zone AU. I attributed my impressions to your writing style where you put too many scenes with different emotions into one chapter. After reading chapter 2, I am now questioning my initial impressions and wondering you intended it to be perceived this way-- if so, I think its brillant storytelling. My biggest question is WTH is Spinner in relation to Law? While people seem to acknowledge his presence, no one (except for Law) really interacts with him and he appears immune to the abuse and emotions that surround Law. I can't help but wonder if the bigger question is not what Jonah and his sister is but what Spinner is. I hope you continue!

Well I certainly want to know what happens next, pretty cool start. Impatiently waiting for more :)

Oh man...I have no idea what Jonah is. Werewolf or Demon are my top picks, but I have no idea lol. Maybe a little bit of both??

Anyways, thank you for the update!! :D Loved the chapter, and I hope Law's days of being abused by his step-dad are over. Though perhaps something more troubling is in store for our guy...haha