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by onamadfreakingtrip

person Lavi1443
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for the update ;)
person Randomperson
schedule February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just got to say that I love the characters in this story, and I really hope you get around to updating this soon. I can't tell whether the characters are super original or not, but you've already made me care about them and I really hope Lawrence gets help soon in some way, someone to ease his pain you know...
person Lavi
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of this story. Very well written! I hope to read more of it so please update soon!
person Kyle91
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving the story thus far! Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next installment!
person chesurKat
schedule November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update :D I've been waiting for it for a long time <3 thanks for coming back, and please update more. The wait has been killing me :]
person Oo
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I adore law, are they in Alaska?
person wolfluv
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking that maybe they were like Sucubus or something like that... I guess that also explains why his sister was son interested in his dick...
I am wondering though is he adopted maybe that is why his dad beats on him or mom hand an affair? read ya laters!
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy you're finally back I found this story ages ago and was just waiting for it to be updated. And the plot seems to be very interesting. Thanks for the update!
person reader
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First time reading the story and I enjoyed it. Hope you keep updating the story. I'm really curious to find out more of what is going to happen.
person Semaya
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the supernatural aspect of the story and I like Law but I feel like the relationship between Law and Jonah is a bit rushed. But overall I do like the story and I'm looking forward to the next update :)